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Mon Dec 03, 2018 6:47 am
Cyvain87 says...



This is the discussion thread for The Haunted Asylum In The Hill Storybook. This is my first time running a story book so please bear with me. Ask anything you like and lets see where this goes.
  





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Mon Dec 03, 2018 8:46 pm
TheMulticoloredCyr says...



Hey! So, I'm in, but should I post my profile here or on the actual thingy magigy thing? And we should probably talk about the characters as well. Since this is your storybook, you would have the most say in saying whether or not something works in the story. Like, I'm most comfortable with fantasy, so I'm most likely to revert back to some elements from that genre that wouldn't function well within the story, and it would be your job to call that out.

All that said, I'm excited to get started!
  





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Mon Dec 03, 2018 8:47 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



May I join?
" If you're lost out where the lights are blinding,
Cold and all the stars are hiding, that's when something wild calls you home"
  





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Wed Dec 05, 2018 6:40 am
Cyvain87 says...



@TheMulticolorerCyr Please post here and I'll place all CP's in the top post here for easy reference.

@FireSpyGirl Your very welcome.


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Wed Dec 05, 2018 2:19 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Yay!
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Cold and all the stars are hiding, that's when something wild calls you home"
  





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Wed Dec 05, 2018 4:48 pm
TheMulticoloredCyr says...



Okay, then let's get started on character creation! (it's my favorite part of anything ever, like, I create a character to play at family gatherings and everything. Because my family is no fun)

So my character will be a short girl with pixy-cut neon orange hair, freckled, tan skin and brown eyes. That should be enough to get a general picture in your head.

I'm not sure if we're allowed to make our actual characters supernatural beings, so I'll just stick with her being a human for now (though I have some ideas if you say that we can have supernatural creatures, but I might not use them either way)

Her backstory will be this; she used to live in a high-income neighborhood, but she ran away when she was seventeen because her parents wanted her to take over the family business, banking, and she would rather carve her own eyes out with a spoon than do that.

Her name is Leila Linosbec.
  





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Wed Dec 05, 2018 5:27 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



My character will be 5'7" fit and strong, but also awkward. Shoulder length black hair with white streaks, usually in a braid, green eyes, tan skin.

Backstory: She is 17, she was taken from her home when she was 6, and has been stuck in this unknown school, where she was trained to be an assassin. She know works for an agency.
" If you're lost out where the lights are blinding,
Cold and all the stars are hiding, that's when something wild calls you home"
  





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Wed Dec 05, 2018 8:14 pm
TheMulticoloredCyr says...



living up to your avatar I see (I noticed you change that, it looks good btw)
  





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Wed Dec 05, 2018 8:50 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Thank you! My avatar is kind of a role model. XD
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Wed Dec 05, 2018 8:54 pm
TheMulticoloredCyr says...



I figured as much. You choose your role model well.
  





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Wed Dec 05, 2018 8:58 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Thank you so much! It's nice that someone approves.
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Thu Dec 06, 2018 3:04 pm
TheMulticoloredCyr says...



I have a question about your character, actually, who took her? You don't really go into detail in her profile.
  





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Thu Dec 06, 2018 3:32 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



The Dead school. Almost no one knows about it, and they take kids like Natalie who have potential as assassins and train them there.
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Thu Dec 06, 2018 3:38 pm
TheMulticoloredCyr says...



Cool, maybe later we can talk more about the school, but for now, what about the story at hand? What happens? You begin.
  





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Thu Dec 06, 2018 3:49 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Okay!
" If you're lost out where the lights are blinding,
Cold and all the stars are hiding, that's when something wild calls you home"
  








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