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The Magical Four



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Tue Nov 06, 2018 11:14 pm
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Lael says...



Zhi Huang

"I don't know how much this'll help, but Zhi Hui and I can cast convincing disguises not just on ourselves, but on others. Not so many at once, mind you--we're not that powerful yet--but one each might be fine." Zhi Huang gave both Sune and Zhi Hui his most charming, winning smile, hoping that they'd agree. "If we need to disguise like the people on Atlantis, that is."

"Dear brother, have you forgotten that we need to find a way back to the Immortal Realm?" By his tone, Zhi Hui wasn't buying it. "Sune's right. We shouldn't go searching for danger in an unknown place."
In God I Trust

"as it is my eager expectation and hope that I will not be at all ashamed, but that with full courage now as always Christ will be honored in my body, whether by life or by death."
Philippians 1:20
  





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Arin


So one of them was convinced, and the other wasn't. She could work with that. She met Zhi Huang's eyes as she spoke, Sune groaning quietly beside her. "We can change our forms up, too," she said. "Sune could do a lot more than I can, but I could make myself look older and copy their uniforms."

"But we have to help them get back home, just like Zhi Hui said," Sune argued. "And I don't think it's a good idea to go barging in there just so I can understand myself better-"

"But it's Atlantis," she interrupted. "They'd totally have something that we could use to get them back home, right? They've got fancy tech, and I've heard their stargate can go anywhere."

She turned her gaze back to Zhi Huang.

"We could totally kill two birds with one stone."
“You cannot get through a single day
without having an impact on
the world around you.

What you do makes a difference,
and you have to decide what kind
of difference you want to make.”

Jane Goodall
  





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Thu Nov 08, 2018 1:18 pm
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Zhi Huang

Zhi Huang smiled. “Exactly. There’s no use in just hiding and being afraid if we end up not finding a way to go back.”

Except, the thought of never returning home was extremely sobering.

“If Atlantis has tools to help us, we should do our utmost to get there.”
In God I Trust

"as it is my eager expectation and hope that I will not be at all ashamed, but that with full courage now as always Christ will be honored in my body, whether by life or by death."
Philippians 1:20
  





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Fri Nov 09, 2018 10:35 am
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Sune


He glanced over at Arin again, a groan dying on his lips as he thought over what she had said. He had always pushed away the thought of going to Atlantis until they had finally met its new people for the first time, but they had never been lucky enough to arrive at a planet the same time Atlantis's inhabitants did.

He needed to find out more about he was someday. He had always known that, but he had told himself that he could wait if it meant making sure he and Arin stayed safe. But now there were two other people who desperately needed the information there so they could return home, and he couldn't come up with the excuse that it was safer to wait. Zhi Hui and Zhi Huang couldn't wait; they had to go back home as soon as possible.

He took a deep breath, air filling his essence instead of his nonexistent lungs.

"Okay," he decided. "I'm alright with us going, as long as we don't start up any major confrontations between us and the people there."

Arin gave an excited cheer from beside him.
“You cannot get through a single day
without having an impact on
the world around you.

What you do makes a difference,
and you have to decide what kind
of difference you want to make.”

Jane Goodall
  








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— William Shakespeare