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Wed Feb 07, 2018 2:48 am
Moalex says...



Hello! Moalex here looking for a review on my fantasy story. After lots of drafts and proofreading, I was wondering if anybody would like to read it and provide an honest review. Please be as honest as possible, I would like to know if it made the reader feel, if you liked it or disliked it, boring, entertaining, good, bad, etc etc. Please and thank you!

The Wrong Era: Chapter 1
  





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Tue Feb 13, 2018 5:02 pm
WritingWolf says...



I have an essay due this Sunday (2/18/18) and I would really like to get some opinions on it before I have to turn it in. (if you're reading this after that I always appreciate opinions on my work, however getting reviews on this specific one won't be as important then)

Reaching Wide Audiences in Serialized Television Shows

Note: What I have here is just the body of the essay. I do have a copy that is formatted in APA with citations, it just isn't compatible with posting on YWS.
~You can only grasp what you reach for~
  





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Wed Feb 28, 2018 3:54 am
CorwinAmber says...



can someone review this it is for a school assignment due 2/28/2018 if you could review before then or the morning of that would be wonderful The last to escape from Caranar
  





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Tue Mar 27, 2018 3:18 am
maishaywca says...



I would like to have some review on my work Devil's Disguise Chapter 2
Maisha Mahmood
  





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Wed Apr 11, 2018 3:12 pm
TheWeirdoFromBeyond says...



I would like someone to review my work Reality chapter 1.
I don't act this way to change the world, I act this way so that the goddamn world won't change me!
-Desert Hearts
You don't think I am weird? You don't know me at all.
-TheWeirdoFromBeyond

TheWeirdoFromBeyond is a LGBT+ supporter
  





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Fri Apr 13, 2018 2:27 am
Queenie says...



Hi, I'd really appreciate it if someone would review my poem The Dream of Night
"Clouds come floating into my life, no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add color to my sunset sky."

-Rabindranath Tagore
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 1:41 pm
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TheWeirdoFromBeyond says...



I would like my work Reality chapter 2 reviewed. THANK YOU
I don't act this way to change the world, I act this way so that the goddamn world won't change me!
-Desert Hearts
You don't think I am weird? You don't know me at all.
-TheWeirdoFromBeyond

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Sun Apr 22, 2018 6:43 pm
Katnes says...



All right people, my works are open to reviewing. Please check out the following-
Jack Cat the case of Macho Gato
Otherwordly Hero (It doesn't have gore-just minor violence-the kind we are used to seeing on TV . . .) and there is zero lanquage.
Crown of Me
Worlds Away From Us
Please check those works out-and thank you before hand for doing so.
Katness Warrior
  





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Sat May 05, 2018 3:03 pm
TheWeirdoFromBeyond says...



Hi, I would like my work, Reality chapter 4 reviewed. THANKS.
I don't act this way to change the world, I act this way so that the goddamn world won't change me!
-Desert Hearts
You don't think I am weird? You don't know me at all.
-TheWeirdoFromBeyond

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Sun Jul 15, 2018 12:14 am
Katnes says...



I am requesting your assistance in reviewing my work, XT note collection Carnixia.
I know it's not a poem or a novel but please give it a look it's not as boring as it seems thanks.
Katness Warrior
  





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Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:36 pm
Emmzziee says...



Alison :)
I want to play a game.
  





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Sun Aug 05, 2018 12:30 am
DeepStories says...



I would love for someone to review my work, SixTeen.
SixTeen
Thank you! :D
  





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Fri Aug 10, 2018 11:52 am
kman134 says...



Hey, everyone, this is Kman134. I had just finished chapter 6 of Magician's Wars. however, I'm not really sure if it's good or not. Here's a link to my new chapter and I want to know what you all think.

Magician's Wars Chapter 6
  





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Sun Aug 19, 2018 3:29 pm
Shikora says...



Hi everyone. I've posted a new chapter on YWS its called Life or Death ~ book one it Begins Chapter 2 and it hasn't got any reviews yet, and I really want an honest opinion on it. I really want to make my writing better so getting some feedback would be really great. So would anyone like to have a look at it?


Hear is the link. Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 2

Thank you everyone.
  





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Sat Oct 06, 2018 11:16 am
Fantascifi66 says...



I would love if someone could review my short story,
The Fighter and the Dragon.

The Fighter and the Dragon
Free reviews by Fanta! [Accepting!]
"I am so weird, it is hard to tell what is weird anymore."- Fantascifi66
  








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