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Thu Jul 12, 2018 9:31 am
Tortwag says...



@EthanHooter Thank you, m'dear! Oh, those happen in SBs, but hey, not gonna complain! *grabs bonus points*
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Thu Jul 12, 2018 10:05 pm
Europa says...



Back briefly, for a few hours at least. @Tortwag, the only critique I have about how you wrote Dawn is growing her own plants from nothing drains her energy more than just accelerating the growth of existing plants like she did with the trees. She'd be a whole lot more worn out if she used a vine she grew herself to get to Teresa.
  





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Fri Jul 13, 2018 2:41 am
Tortwag says...



@Europa Back to the original plan, then, I need Teresa to lift her up there. Hmm, that'll leave her more worn out, but they'll get some time to recuperate during the walk. Didn't want her to get all the action, but oh well! Allow me to modify.

EDIT: Done! Does that seem better, m'dear?
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  








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