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Thu Jun 21, 2018 10:35 pm
EthanHoover says...



That's okay, I just wanted to know for when I have to write her name later.

P.S. Sorry if it felt like I was nitpicking, just being me. Haters gonna hate, Editors(or editor wannabes, anyway) gonna edit.
  





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Thu Jun 21, 2018 10:44 pm
Europa says...



@EthanHoover it's cool. Glad someone's holding me accountable ;)
  





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Sun Jun 24, 2018 11:11 pm
Europa says...



@Tortwag how's the post going?
  





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Mon Jun 25, 2018 9:48 am
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@Europa "I can't guarantee that I'll be the next one posting, but yeah, just a heads-up." <--- thaaaat... Would be my previous words on the matter, m'dear. Although, now is a good time for updates, yes indeed. So!

•I'm steadily catching up with posts all around. I have around 1/4 of the Damocles one done, so, so far so good. Sorry for taking a while!

So yeah, that's about it for me.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Tue Jun 26, 2018 2:10 am
EthanHoover says...



I can post after Tortwag, it nobody minds.
  





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Tue Jun 26, 2018 2:36 am
Europa says...



@EthanHoover sure! If Tortwag doesn't finish his post soon enough, would you be comfortable with going before?
  





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Wed Jun 27, 2018 1:13 am
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Sure, but I thought we might be keeping a pattern with the viewpoints, keeping the pairs in tandem(Ivy/Cog, Dawn/Teresa, and so on) If not, my chapter is almost done, but I'd like to do a rewrite first...
  





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Wed Jun 27, 2018 10:48 pm
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If yours gets done before Tortwag's, then it would be best if you posted it. I'm I like the partner pattern, but I'm more concerned with keeping the SB moving.
  





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Thu Jun 28, 2018 12:47 am
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Alright, will do. I guess I could always delete and repost it if necessary. Also, if I get anyone's character wrong, I'm always eager and willing to do an edit.
  





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Fri Jun 29, 2018 4:14 pm
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Due to a parent-issued electronics fast, I won't be online for a while. While I'm gone, @Chaser is in charge. Since I'm not too sure when I'll be back, I've decided to entrust Ivy and Dawn to their respective partners. @Chaser and @Tortwag, are you up for that?
  





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Tue Jul 03, 2018 6:05 pm
Chaser says...



As your proxy leader, I'd like to know how your posts are doing. But more importantly, how are you doing? Still enjoying our aimless adventure?

(By the time of the next post, I'll have developed our first antagonist. Stay tuned!)
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.
  





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Tue Jul 03, 2018 6:29 pm
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@Chaser my post is near completion, but I keep rewriting it... We'll see how it turns out! And I'm looking forward to seeing our new enemy!
  





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Thu Jul 05, 2018 10:57 pm
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@Chaser and now that I've caught up with another SB, I can focus on the post for this one again! I'm still around 1/4 done, so, I'll have to try and keep advancing steadily.

@Europa By the way, yup, I'll casually confirm that Teresa is indeed the right spelling. Shame that your auto-correct's being mean, though, but yes, do change that detail whenever you're back, m'dear. *shrugs* It'll just be easier to remember, is all.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Wed Jul 11, 2018 6:35 pm
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Aaaand POSTED! Gosh, that was So. Much. Fun XD @Europa I hope I didn't get anything too wrong with Dawn, m'dear. Do tell if I did.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Thu Jul 12, 2018 2:53 am
EthanHoover says...



@Tortwag looks great! And bonus points for the chapter title!
  








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