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Wed May 16, 2018 5:49 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I had the thought of a scavenger party being what distracts Aaron long enough that Dan is attacked. I thought that might be something that would make sense with how careful Aaron usually is. He is so focused on one danger that he doesn't do a proper check of the pharmacy.
  





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Wed May 16, 2018 5:54 pm
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Alright, I'm down with whatever
" I’ve been trying to lay my head down, but I’m writing this at 3am." - Mitski
  





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Thu May 17, 2018 1:02 am
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@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX

I can't access that pad. Can you change the permissions to allow guests?

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

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Thu May 17, 2018 4:59 am
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Synnoev says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX Your post is so good !! Love the action and tension
  





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Thu May 17, 2018 5:19 am
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Yes, great post! @XxXTheSwordsmanXxX

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Thu May 17, 2018 11:15 am
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@xxxswordsmanxxx yeeeees love the post. very intense hoho
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Thu May 24, 2018 12:07 am
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Synnoev says...



Who's going next?
  





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Thu May 24, 2018 2:31 am
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Suppossed to be Corvid for a proper introduction of the character.
  





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Fri May 25, 2018 12:53 am
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Elinor says...



Yes I believe corvid is next, and then me?

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