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Wed May 16, 2018 5:49 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



I had the thought of a scavenger party being what distracts Aaron long enough that Dan is attacked. I thought that might be something that would make sense with how careful Aaron usually is. He is so focused on one danger that he doesn't do a proper check of the pharmacy.
  





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Wed May 16, 2018 5:54 pm
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Alright, I'm down with whatever
" I’ve been trying to lay my head down, but I’m writing this at 3am." - Mitski
  





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Thu May 17, 2018 1:02 am
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Elinor says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX

I can't access that pad. Can you change the permissions to allow guests?

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Thu May 17, 2018 4:59 am
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Synnoev says...



@XxXTheSwordsmanXxX Your post is so good !! Love the action and tension
  





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Thu May 17, 2018 5:19 am
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Yes, great post! @XxXTheSwordsmanXxX

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Thu May 17, 2018 11:15 am
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@xxxswordsmanxxx yeeeees love the post. very intense hoho
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Thu May 24, 2018 12:07 am
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Synnoev says...



Who's going next?
  





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Thu May 24, 2018 2:31 am
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Suppossed to be Corvid for a proper introduction of the character.
  





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Fri May 25, 2018 12:53 am
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Elinor says...



Yes I believe corvid is next, and then me?

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Tue May 29, 2018 9:56 pm
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DivinePrincess says...



Okay @Elinor you can post if you want. I’m trying to keep this SB alive! :)
  





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Wed May 30, 2018 5:11 pm
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Elinor says...



I can make a post this weekend!

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Fri Jun 01, 2018 3:56 pm
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Elinor says...



Posted! Hope it's alright. :)

I can't remember we talked about how he's going to be cured, but I don't know if that's something you guys want to touch on in your next few posts. Dan will definitely have more to deal with once he's cured and is able to process everything that happened.

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