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Wed Feb 14, 2018 5:46 am
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hey so this week's pretty packed for me so i might get something out by friday if not the weekend. Sorry!
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Wed Feb 14, 2018 6:31 am
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@Poopsie Then good luck surviving, m'dear! Seems like we're basically all reaching an exam period at some point, it's getting pretty tough XD

...WHICH IS WHY WE SHALL SURVIVE AND BECOME STRONGER THAN TEACHERS CAN POSSIBLY IMAGINE.
Tch. I need to rewatch these movies.
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Wed Feb 14, 2018 10:13 am
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Saen says...



It's alright! Just get a post up whenever you can, @Poopsie. Good luck with all the stuff you're doing this week.
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Sun Feb 25, 2018 11:54 pm
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How is your post coming along, @Poopsie? I understand if you've been unable to work on it. Life can be a major pain.
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Wed Mar 07, 2018 10:49 am
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I'm sorry to bother you, @Poopsie, but will you be able to get your post up soon?
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Tue Mar 13, 2018 8:14 pm
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I'm really sorry to keep asking you about this, but how is your post coming along, @Poopsie? If you can't post, please let me know soon so I can start up the next round of posts.
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Tue Mar 13, 2018 11:24 pm
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Not that it would do anything if I pinged as well, I'll at least voice here that uh, yeah, we're very close to starting the next round, so it would be a real shame to remain blocked here.
Not sure what's happening on your side, m'dear.
@saentiel it may be an inability to access internet, though - and if it's that, I... suppose you'll have to make a skip of some sort?
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Fri Mar 16, 2018 5:38 am
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Poopsie says...



Okay. I'm not sure what I posted is right plot wise or any good at all (I just knew I had to get something out), so If you have any edits just tell me. Sorryyyyyyyyy
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Fri Mar 16, 2018 9:15 am
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You got it spot on, @Poopsie! I'm not sure how you did with the other characters, since Puck wasn't in your post, but you hit all the plot points you needed to. c: I'll try to get a post up this weekend or after my SATs on Wednesday.
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Sat Mar 17, 2018 12:36 am
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Tortwag says...



@Poopsie a few things to edit indeed!

♦Nico Ringo would never, ever allow anyone to call her by her first name only, not even Puck, so yeah, you can either have Joon call her by her full name the first time, or have her violently correct him with her profile-mentioned line: "Hi, name's Nico Ringo, please refer to me with the full name at all times or get your butt kicked".

♦Shey will be the one to correct you - or not - on this, but... Since Valentine isn't interested in social interactions, for the most part, I'm surprised that he talked, there. he's definitely not mute, but well, Joon's not a friend of his, yet.


Aaaand that's about it! Because yeah, as Sae said, the post was pretty spot on! Welcome back, m'dear :3 Glad we didn't have to skip that.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Sun Mar 18, 2018 11:50 am
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@Tortwag, @Feltrix, @Poopsie and @Lael, your characters all seniors, and the next arc is going to need some drivers. Would you be alright if your characters have drivers licenses and offer to drive the younger guys to the mysterious location I'm plotting out?
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Sun Mar 18, 2018 12:02 pm
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Fine by me.
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Sun Mar 18, 2018 12:03 pm
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Great!

By the way, the plot is now up for the second arc! You can check it out here. Please claim a spot in it! I'm tentatively calling this arc The Eight Children Arc, since you'll find that our cast isn't the first to find the book. I should get my post for it up by the end of the day, as well as the challenge.
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Sun Mar 18, 2018 1:37 pm
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I'm a bit late, because somehow I missed this. @Tortwag, while Val is relatively antisocial, it's not that he's shy, so talking in front of others he doesn't no isn't a problem for him.
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Sun Mar 18, 2018 3:40 pm
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@Sheytato It's not shyness that I thought was a problem, just the fact that since he's a bit antisocial, giving information to somebody he doesn't know when Nico Ringo can do it for everybody's sake would appear redundant from what I understood of his mindset. But your comment here suggests that it's not the case, so hey! That's a piece of data I'll have to keep in mind.

@saentiel Sure! That is completely fine for me too.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  








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