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Sun Oct 29, 2017 12:31 am
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ajruby12 says...



There's an eerie shadow approaching the innocent citizens of Metropolis! We still have time, but the remaining heroes must assemble so Super CC can start talking everyone's ears off! Err, I mean, share the super important details of a super short meeting.

(Almost there, peeps! I'm excited to get this started!)
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Sun Oct 29, 2017 7:40 am
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woohoo!
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Mon Oct 30, 2017 3:27 pm
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My template is up! Please don't ask why it took so long - school, forgetfulness, and lack of subscribing to either threads are the cause. I'll have my intro up soon.
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In my eyes, all potatoes are equal.


...Except sweet potatoes.

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Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:59 pm
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@Sheytato, I LOVE it! xD

I understand that life gets crazy! Just do it when you can! :)
(It doesn't have to be lengthy or anything, but just something to introduce your character and have a little interaction)
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Mon Nov 06, 2017 7:24 pm
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Posted! Sorry for the delay!
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Wed Nov 08, 2017 1:53 am
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@Sheytato, it's ok! Thanks for getting it up!
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Wed Nov 08, 2017 1:56 am
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All right, team members, this is it! The first assignment has been issued! Each of you has a posting assignment. (If you want to change or add on to your assignment or the storyline in general, feel free to chat with me and we will figure it out!)

Here is the assignment (it's also in the WriterFeedPad)


First assignment - The Jugglernaught

    The mission is introduced to the team, as well as any safety precautions and such, like don't feed the sewer piranahas, watch out for the Jugglernaught's laughing gas, and, no matter what, always rescue cute kittens from trees (@ajruby)


    The team gears up and travels to an abandoned circus. When they enter the building, they encounter a blockade that they can only pass after answering a riddle. After answering the riddle correctly, the team is able to move on, but is attacked by a horde of monkeys and must fend them off. (@saentiel)


    The team enters the circus ring and the Jugglernaught emerges to fight them. They begin attacking, but then the Crimson Trident and Skunk are ensnared and trapped in a water tank that they can't escape from. (@soundofmind)


    Trident and Skunk are rescued from the tank, but just then, Jugglernaught disappears through a ring of fire and the team pursues him through the circus buildings, following him back to his secret lair underneath the circus. The team must pass an assortment of traps and barricades, mostly circus themed and most of them lame and easy to bypass. (@Europa)


    The team gets through the traps and finds Jugglernaught, attacking in full force. They kick Jugglernaught's metallic behind and drag him to a "high security" prison, where he'll most likely break out in a few months anyway, but who cares? The team then is called back for a second assignment.. (@Sheytato)
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Wed Nov 08, 2017 2:23 am
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WOO YEAHHH yes! This is awesome planning! Honestly GOOD JOB and thank you for making this outline/assignment. <3 I'm excited to get to mine and see how everyone else's turns out!

ALSO @ajruby12 AWESOME post!! hahaha omg I love how you wrote Duplo that's amazing w/his suit thing and then Croc haha
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Wed Nov 08, 2017 10:12 am
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Well, we're the protagonists, so we'll win.


I love that logic so much.

I'll get my post up by the end of this weekend!
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Wed Nov 08, 2017 6:23 pm
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@ajruby12 got it! Any suggestions for traps?
  





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Thu Nov 09, 2017 4:46 am
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@Europa, just use your imagination! You can make them circus themed or just stereotypical villain traps (like poisoned darts, those weird swingy blades, etc)

@soundofmind, thank you! You guys make the storybook though with your fantastic characters. I can't wait for this budding team to tackle their first vile villain!
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Sun Nov 12, 2017 5:17 pm
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I'm sorry for not getting my post up this weekend. I'll try getting it up by Wednesday night, but I'm aiming to do it tomorrow.
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Tue Nov 14, 2017 11:49 am
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My post is up! Sorry for taking so long to write it, and I'm sorry about how short it is.
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Tue Nov 14, 2017 12:08 pm
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soundofmind says...



@saentiel omg that was great!!

BAHAHAHAHA I JUST LOVE HOW CONVENIENT DUPLOT'S HAMMERSPACE POWER IS HAHAHAHA. The banana idea was great, and I love how you wrote Duplo hahah

Also, I'll get to my post by this weekend hopefully!
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Wed Nov 15, 2017 12:39 am
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@saentiel, it's fantastic! "Super fantastic", as Super C.C. would say. xD
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