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Sun Oct 22, 2017 9:23 am
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Terian805 says...



Pango sounds absolutely crazy but I love him! I'll add the Dreadmill to the list of places in the Dust City. @Tortwag if you hae any problems with his description then go ahead. I imagined if he hungered for conflict he'd go and join in if comes across anything. Also, addressing everyone here for a moment, I'm on holiday right now so the wi-fi is slighty dodgy. I reckon I'll be writing the first post later this week if that's OK :D
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Sun Oct 22, 2017 10:51 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



@Terian805 I'd wager you could say that about most of the characters I create, but this one is... especially crazy XD

Thank you! Glad you like the idea. And enjoy your holiday, m'dear! Make sure you get yourself a badass rest to keep your creativity fresh before your first post, eh? I'll plan out mine in the meantime, since I'll be in a tough week starting next, well, week.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:09 pm
Lael says...



Hey @Terian805, I don't mean to be pressuring, but how's your post going?
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Mon Oct 30, 2017 5:17 pm
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Yeah I apologise I had a lot going on last week. It's almost done it'll be up on Wednesday at the latest. @Lael
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Wed Nov 01, 2017 6:05 pm
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Terian805 says...



OK first post up, sorry for the wait. It's kinda long but enjoyable hopefully! Now whoever would like to go next please do. Now a couple of pointers...

Try to make your post more introductory, make it sum up what your character is about.

If you can, try and keep it grounded. I want this Storybook to be absolutely crazy of course, but it needs to be linked to reality now, if you take my meaning.

It would be great if you could add threads for future conflicts in the Storybook.

Maybe you could make links to other characters if possible, like I tried to.

Don't rush ahead. We can discuss plot a bit later.
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Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:34 pm
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Mageheart says...



I have Monday and Tuesday off from school this upcoming week, so I could get up then or possibly sooner. Does anyone mind if I go next?
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Thu Nov 02, 2017 2:42 am
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Lael says...



I don't mind if Sae goes next. It was a good post as well.
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Sat Nov 04, 2017 10:16 pm
Mageheart says...



My post is up! Please let me know if I need to change anything.
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Sun Nov 05, 2017 12:12 am
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Lael says...



Great post, @saentiel! I'm looking forward to writing my own post sometime soon, hopefully.
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Sun Nov 05, 2017 1:30 pm
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Terian805 says...



Great post @saentiel. Now I'm adding various other NPCs to the story if anyone requires a someone to meet in their post. Jasmine however, is the girl that Finn was going to rescue, so keep that in mind. I reckon Finn is going to meet her later. Remember that you all are perfectly free to make up your own locations and NPCs!
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Sun Nov 05, 2017 9:21 pm
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TinkerTwaggy says...



Oh don't worry about that, m'dear, I'm sure we can improvise NPCs unless you tell us not too if they break the storyline or something, but still, thanks. I'll read those two posts this week, and shall start preparing mine.

Not calling dibs on the next one though, so, whoever is ready can go ahead!
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Mon Nov 13, 2017 4:02 am
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Lael says...



My post should be coming up on Friday at the earliest!
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Mon Nov 13, 2017 7:53 pm
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Terian805 says...



Great! After all the references to Stella I'm looking forward to seeing her POV!
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Wed Nov 15, 2017 8:35 am
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TinkerTwaggy says...



And I finished a good first quarter of mine. Good luck with your post, Lael!
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Wed Nov 22, 2017 3:11 am
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Lael says...



Okay, it's posted! Notice how Stella doesn't exactly pay attention to/notice the 'dangers' of the Dust City. Also I didn't really intend to explore Stella missing her dad in this post, but I guess she led me there. :)
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