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Tue Mar 12, 2019 4:34 am
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Featherstone says...



Oh my word I completely forgot last Friday

this is happening way too much, I'm so sorry guys

@Lael I'm busy tomorrow and Wednesday with midterms, but I'll be available Thursday or Friday.
“Turning and turning in the widening gyre,
The falcon cannot hear the falconer;
Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;
Mere anarchy is loosed on the world."
~ W.B. Yeats
  





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Thu Mar 14, 2019 8:31 pm
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@Featherstone is Friday good? 2 PST?
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"as it is my eager expectation and hope that I will not be at all ashamed, but that with full courage now as always Christ will be honored in my body, whether by life or by death."
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Sun Mar 24, 2019 2:45 am
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Okay, I've finally posted! Thanks for being patient.
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Sun Mar 24, 2019 3:43 am
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soundofmind says...



@Lael @Featherstone OMG!! WHAT A PLEASANT SURPRISE AAA I LOVE IT

Kaia pulling up the mask again,,, she did good and I am proud of her for that, but I'm also proud of her for feeling like she's a part of the group :,) <3

Also I love the little bit of extra Ari backstory we got in there w/Rhydam ooOoOooo

I guess that leaves uhhh @Wolfical to go next!

Spoiler! :
9. Brett and Rose find some of the others to talk about where they're meeting up back up (james and adina probs?) in the outskirts of town at their beach. Suggests he brings his brother to meet them, James is wary but agrees. Timeskip to sundown. Group meets and Kaia informs them they should probably get moving again soon b/c of the guy on Ari's tail. Brett returns but his brother Matt comes with - recieves suspicion and uneasy reception b/c Matt is a law-abiding citizen. Brett kinda doesn't want to leave (because that's an eventuality) b/c his brother is there. Conflict of staying or leaving left partially unsettled. Lots of awk tension I imagine. Brett goes to stay with his bro on his ship for the night - then end up having a heart-to-heart. Catchin' up like good bros. (Will meet back up w/the group in the morning, when Matt's gonna leave). @Wolfical
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Tue Mar 26, 2019 4:37 am
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Wolfical says...



//post of acknowledgement

Expect it in a week or so!
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.
  





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Tue Mar 26, 2019 4:38 am
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aaaaa okay!! <3 thank u for acknowledging
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Tue Apr 02, 2019 7:47 am
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how r ya’ll
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Wed Apr 03, 2019 2:19 am
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Wolfical says...



Oof yes hi I am school-y how r u sound

I shall work on the post tonight!

EDIT: It'll hopefully be done during the weekend.

another EDIT: uhhh ***Tuesday.
Last edited by Wolfical on Mon Apr 08, 2019 5:41 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Wed Apr 03, 2019 9:38 am
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soundofmind says...



i am doin alrighto!!! feelin a little pooped but otherwise all is well

and aaa ok!!!!!! i look forward to,, completed post!
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Wed Apr 10, 2019 7:00 am
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Ooof I thought I could finish the post tonight but I'm making it too long, whoops. It'll be done soon!! >.<
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Wed Apr 10, 2019 9:39 am
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No worries!! I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO IT!!!!!
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Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:30 pm
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soundofmind says...



do any of ya’ll have songs you associate with your characters because i have a whole diddly darned playlist for james and its giving me feels

and i thought hey what if ya’ll have songs
so i can have more feels
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Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:33 pm
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@sherlockhson I DONT WANNA STEAL YOUR THUNDER BUT I REMEMBER U LINKING ME TO tHIS SONg FOR ROSE AND I NEED EVERYONE ELSE TO HEAR

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Fri Apr 26, 2019 12:24 pm
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i'm gonna quadruple post because i'm procrastinating and nervous

hi guys i love ya'll
that's all i want to say
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Fri Apr 26, 2019 3:54 pm
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THIS REMINDED ME
I DO HAVE A SONG FOR ARI

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it has no words I'm sorry
“Turning and turning in the widening gyre,
The falcon cannot hear the falconer;
Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;
Mere anarchy is loosed on the world."
~ W.B. Yeats
  








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