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Wed Jun 06, 2018 5:40 pm
AstralHunter says...



The Outlands: Round Three

@FalconerGal9086 @Wolfical @Lael @sherlockhson


For this next round, you will get one point for any of the following:

1. Collaborating with another Outlands SB-er!
2. Exploring your characters's insecurities and/or fears via character interactions.
3. Your post being over 700 words.

BONUS: Include mention of stickers bars in your post. This can only be claimed by one person in this round, so first come, first serve.

Completion Time: The duration of Round Three
Credits Awarded: A total possibility of 4!

Good luck with Round Four!
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Wed Jun 13, 2018 11:29 am
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@Lael omg!!! I loved your post and that flashback was quality. Good stuff. Moved me hearty.

Forreal, good job. Great characterization.

LOOKS LIKE I'M UP NEXT LOL. TAG, I'M IT
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Wed Jun 13, 2018 1:04 pm
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MINE'S KIND OF SHORT BUT I HAD TO SEIZE THE TIME I HAD TONIGHT

hopefully ya'll like it well enough ashjgklfhgj

@Falconergal9086 i guess!! that means you're next! Let me know when you think you could get to it!
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Wed Jun 13, 2018 4:04 pm
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Alright, I should be able to get to it this week!
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 2:58 am
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@FAlconergal9086 OMG THAT WAS SUCH A FUN POST TO WRITE AND READ HAHA

Ari taking on a BIG 'OL GRIFFIN. SO STRONG

This is gonna be a short round, so it's almost up, but we've got some important posts coming up to wrap up all that action! We've got @Wolfical next! Let me know if you want help and when you think you can get to it!

PUTTING THIS HERE TOO so u don't have to search thru the dt to find what your post is for (I also SLIGHTLY modified it so there's one less post, because I realized two were kind of repetitive and could easily be combined into one).
Spoiler! :
Some of them are injured, but they got away. Healing/recovering. Rose and Adina leave to go into town to get some medicine. But in this post we stay back w/the wounded/beat up peeps to talk and we can have whatever reflection/character development happen here w/the dudes. @Wolfical
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Thu Jun 14, 2018 3:08 am
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also I'm super free because I'm out of school and don't have summer plans so if you wanna collab on something I would totally love to! That goes for everyone!
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Tue Jun 19, 2018 3:14 am
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WOAh there! Three posts in one day??

Summer finally started so I'll get to reading these and writing the post asap! Sorry for being MIA for a little while there ~
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Tue Jun 19, 2018 3:21 am
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AAAsahlkjdsgha NO WORRIES!! and lol yeah WE WERE BUSY/I WAS EXCITED AND HAD FREE TIME LOL
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Sun Jun 24, 2018 4:59 am
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"AIN'T NO 'UN KILLIN' ME FRIENDS 'CEPT ME!" he bellowed.

PFfft I love Ari hahaha

@FalconerGal9086 yayyy congrats on the moldiness! Would you be interested in collabing sometime this week on a post?
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Sun Jun 24, 2018 12:56 pm
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@Wolfical thank you, and sure!!! What time zone are you in, so we can plan? I'm PST
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Sun Jun 24, 2018 4:57 pm
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Ayyyee me too! Awesome. As of right now I'm free any day but Wednesday.
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Sun Jun 24, 2018 5:00 pm
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Well I'll be kind of all over the place until Wednesday 'cause I'm travelling, but how does Thursday sound?
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Sun Jun 24, 2018 6:19 pm
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Wolfical says...



Perfect!
John 14:27:
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Thu Jun 28, 2018 6:11 pm
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@Wolfical @falconergal9086 OH MY GOOSSHHHHHHH THAT WAS SUCH A FUN POST TO WRITE LOL I LOVE IT SO MUCH

NEXT IS @sherlockhson YEET
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