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Mon Oct 09, 2017 11:37 am
Saen says...



I understand, @Steggy!

Since you've been having trouble with your post, @DemonGoddess, do you want to send me what you already have so I can help you work on it? We could do it over WFP or through PMs.

The only other people who haven't posted yet are @Strident and @KaiRyu. Are either of you interested in posting next while Steggy and DemonGoddess work on their posts?

Also, don't forget to claim your points for the challenge if you've completed it!
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Wed Oct 11, 2017 1:33 pm
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I've been busy. I'll get on it.
  





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Thu Oct 12, 2017 10:27 am
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Saen says...



You wrote a great post, @Steggy! It was cool seeing how understanding her coach was.

I loved your post, @Strident! I love how much you incorporated your character's love of food into your post.

That just leaves @KaiRyu and @DemonGoddess. I can see your posts going two different ways. The first is that one of you writes a post with your character in school, and the second person writes one where they arrive at the haunted house and get attacked. Alternatively, both posts take place at the haunted house. The first is when they arrive there and start looking around, while the second is when they get attacked. But it's up to whoever goes next!
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Thu Oct 12, 2017 11:35 am
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zaminami says...



I'll do the one for the haunted house :D that should be pretty easy.
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Grell is the most fabulous. End of story.



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Sun Oct 15, 2017 3:50 pm
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Great, @DemonGoddess!

@KaiRyu, can you get your post up soon?
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 5:11 pm
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KaiRyu says...



I'm working on it now! :D
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 5:25 pm
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That's perfect! Are you going to have them go the haunted house in your post, or are you just going to let @DemonGoddess take care of that part?
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 5:54 pm
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Lumi says...



If y'all need an Andy post anytime to smooth out the flow with whatever Andy needs to do, let me know.
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Sun Oct 15, 2017 7:33 pm
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KaiRyu says...



I'll leave the haunted house post to Kara if that's alright. ^-^
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Mon Oct 16, 2017 12:51 pm
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KaiRyu says...



Andddd it's up. Sorry if it's bad, I haven't done this in a while. ^-^"
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Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:45 pm
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I loved your post, @KaiRyu! You did a wonderful job with it.

@DemonGoddess, you're up! When can you get a post up by? Also, if you're having trouble with, please shoot me a PM. I'd love to help you out! (Save for the tagbook, is this going to be your first storybook post?)
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Mon Oct 16, 2017 9:52 pm
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zaminami says...



Um... I did one once before, but it was really short :P but yeah, it is.
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Grell is the most fabulous. End of story.



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Fri Oct 20, 2017 10:58 am
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@DemonGoddess, would you be able to get your post up by tomorrow? You're the only person who needs to post in the introduction arc.
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Fri Oct 20, 2017 11:22 am
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zaminami says...



I can try. I have a football game tonight, but I can try.
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Grell is the most fabulous. End of story.



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Fri Oct 20, 2017 6:08 pm
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Okay! I completely understand. Even if you post it tomorrow night, that should be good. Have fun at your game! (I'm actually going to my school's homecoming game tonight!)
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