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Thu Jun 07, 2018 7:51 pm
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MJTucker says...



The rough draft of my post is up in the WFP! I'll try to have it edited and posted by the 13th, but I am going to be out of town from Friday-Sunday. In the meantime, I would appreciate any feedback on all aspects of the post, large or small :)
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Fri Jun 08, 2018 9:33 am
soundofmind says...



@MJTucker !!!! AAA YES I WILL LOOK AT IT

I'm so happy and hyped to read it omg
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Wed Jun 13, 2018 2:11 am
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@MJTucker I LOVED YOUR POST IT WAS WONDERFUL
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Wed Jun 13, 2018 2:26 pm
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Thanks @soundofmind! I'm glad I was able to get it up on time, since I may or may not have temporarily forgotten about it after I put it up in the WFP, but thankfully I still had time to edit it!
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Sun Jun 17, 2018 2:23 am
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Grr rawr, my life is too busy... I won't be able to get a post up for at least 2 weeks, since I'm leaving on a trip tomorrow and am currently hectically packing. Hopefully I'll be able to post after that
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Sun Jun 17, 2018 2:36 am
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@ajruby12 AAa, I hope u have fun on your trip!! And I look forward to your post!!!!!
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Thu Jul 19, 2018 8:27 am
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Helloooo, people! I was, uh, monitoring through SBs here and there and noticed that this one had no Healer role in the character templates! well I mean I mostly assume that someone left of something but out of sheer curiosity, and assuming you're looking for someone to fill the part, I wouldn't mind!

...Assuming I can actually create a character and join in! If anyone's interested! Maybe! You don't have to be! I'll read the two pages to see where this is going anyway!


'Kay thx bai!
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Thu Jul 19, 2018 8:39 am
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@Tortwag OMG YES WE HAVE NEEDED A HEALER because ISLE DIED and also peeps have dropped out hhh SO DUDE OMG YES

of course shey is the one u should ask but at least from me u have my full support
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Thu Jul 19, 2018 10:05 am
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Ah. She died. Let's see, I need the appropriate way to react to death. a JoJo pose!

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*↑ Actual, real reaction to the death of someone close to them*

That being said, yay! Uh... So, the description of Healer says that I can only heal, but have literally nothing else. Can spells technology, I guess, give me stats buffs? Since, well, everybody's gonna attack the healer, and the healer usually has a lot of health + temporary stat buffs for everybody in RPGs to, y'know, not die in one hit. Y'all tell me, but I'm just asking to make sure.
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Thu Jul 19, 2018 12:53 pm
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Sheyren says...



YES YOU CAN JOIN AND BREATH LIFE INTO THIS STORYBOOK @Tortwag

Also yeah, you can definitely give them stay buffs, and even a few combat abilities to keep them alive. They need some defense, for sure.
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Thu Jul 19, 2018 2:24 pm
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@Sheyren WHAT OH OKAY

Yeah, that's what I meant. Thanks! I just wanted to make sure poor healer wouldn't be completely defenseless and only able to heal, since that's pretty much asking for death in that setting. And trauma. Lots and lots of trauma.

Welp, Already have a character in mind, but I'll read through everything before going in and doing anything specific.
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Fri Jul 20, 2018 10:33 am
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Okaaaay, done catchin' up with the first arc! That went... Much less good than expected! I'm only saying that because the revolt didn't finish with the oppressive pro-nazis not blowing up, and also BECAUSE I NEVER GOT TO LEARN HAZEL-EYED BADASS BEAUTY'S NAME. HOW COULD YOU, PEOPLE.

Childish tantrums aside, on with the show! Not up to the second page yet, but close!
Last edited by Tortwag on Fri Jul 20, 2018 10:51 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Jul 20, 2018 10:40 am
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@Tortwag YAYAYAYAY
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Fri Jul 20, 2018 7:26 pm
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Done with the second arc! There should be one to two left for me to catch up to.
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Wed Jul 25, 2018 12:06 pm
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Okay, caught up with everything. So, to start with, @Saen I'm starting to have a preeeeetty good idea on how to give Lurin her epic sortie in this story, so, hope you'll at least enjoy reading that when you can, m'dear. Question - if needed, can I write things from her perspective? I don't necessarily need to, but eh, just making sure.

That being said, I shall now begin to plan out the purpose of my character - well I already have, but I mean, more in line to the current plot.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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