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Wed Sep 27, 2017 8:50 pm
Lael says...



I started a post, and I'll try to finish it up this weekend.
"as it is my eager expectation and hope that I will not be at all ashamed, but that with full courage now as always Christ will be honored in my body, whether by life or by death."
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Wed Sep 27, 2017 9:10 pm
MJTucker says...



No rush! Thanks for stepping up :) You can always post them in the WFP so others can submit edits and their thoughts.
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Sat Sep 30, 2017 5:06 am
Lael says...



Posted! I felt like it was a little more awkwardly written than my other intro SB posts in the past, but it's okay, I guess.
"as it is my eager expectation and hope that I will not be at all ashamed, but that with full courage now as always Christ will be honored in my body, whether by life or by death."
Philippians 1:20
  





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Sat Sep 30, 2017 2:10 pm
Strident says...



I've been working on one.
  





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Sat Sep 30, 2017 3:02 pm
MJTucker says...



@Lael your post was great! Definitely better than mine.
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Sat Sep 30, 2017 3:08 pm
Lael says...



Aww, thanks @MJTucker! I liked your post, though.
"as it is my eager expectation and hope that I will not be at all ashamed, but that with full courage now as always Christ will be honored in my body, whether by life or by death."
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Wed Oct 11, 2017 10:39 pm
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Strident says...



Posted! I hope you like the post. I feel like I could have done better..
  





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Wed Oct 11, 2017 10:44 pm
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You did great, Strident! The thing about being a writer is that you can always improve, and I'm very happy with your post! Everyone feels that way at some point or another, so just do your best and that will be enough :)
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Wed Oct 11, 2017 11:14 pm
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Yeah, great post, @Strident! Can't wait to see more of Edric.
"as it is my eager expectation and hope that I will not be at all ashamed, but that with full courage now as always Christ will be honored in my body, whether by life or by death."
Philippians 1:20
  





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Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:44 pm
Lightsong says...



Sorry, I would have to withdraw from this RP. It turns out I'm only capable on one RP. :(
  








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