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Mon Apr 16, 2018 2:40 pm
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soundofmind says...



BOOM! Set it up for some of ya'll to have fun with action and "oh no what it mean" stuff! GO WILD!

Also implied: Kiirion can't heal himself. A fun drawback to having the ability to heal people with a simple touch.
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 9:21 pm
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soundofmind says...



ALSO I DREW KIIRION..... really quickly so..... hope it's okay to share here aaaa

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Mon Apr 16, 2018 9:45 pm
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Lael says...



Ahh... what a handsome dude. xD Very well done.
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 9:59 pm
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@Lael !! THANKs lol

tbh it's not exactly how i imagine him but someday..... someday i will do him justice
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 11:50 pm
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MJTucker says...



Whoa, great post sound!
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 12:58 am
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Lael says...



Good post, @soundofmind! @TheForgottenKing, we haven't heard from you for a long time. I understand if you're busy, but please let us know how you are.
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 1:07 am
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Thanks, guys!
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 1:37 am
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Wolfical says...



Woahhhh @soundofmind your post is epic!!

Love your sketch of Kiirion too!
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 1:40 am
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soundofmind says...



!!! AA thanks @Wolfical!! Lol I wanted to JACK UP THE INTENSITY a bit because i,,,, crave some action lol

hopefully whoever goes next has fun

fight scenes are a blast
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 1:42 am
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Wolfical says...



@Wolfie is the reason why I had to come up with a more original name xD

Fight scenes yussss

I promised two other SBs priority so that person probably won't be me. Unless y'all are super patient.
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 1:45 am
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soundofmind says...



@Wolfical omg i'm so sorry WOW *edited that but

hahah i'm so used to calling u wolfie wow
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Fri Apr 27, 2018 11:55 pm
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Lael says...



Hello, @TheForgottenKing? Are you there?

In the meantime, is anyone interested in posting?
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Tue May 22, 2018 2:12 am
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Okay, since @TheForgottenKing has been MIA for a while now, I think it's time someone else took over the role of Thorik. If any of you would be interested, or know of someone who would be interested, post here please, ASAP! Otherwise, he will become NPC.
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Wed Jun 06, 2018 10:54 pm
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Lael says...



Sorry for the triple post, but if any of you would like to take on Thorik or think someone on YWS could, please let me know. I'd hate to let him become just an NPC because he's just as important to the Fellowship as any other member.

Lael wrote:Okay, since @TheForgottenKing has been MIA for a while now, I think it's time someone else took over the role of Thorik. If any of you would be interested, or know of someone who would be interested, post here please, ASAP! Otherwise, he will become NPC.
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Philippians 1:20
  





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Thu Jun 14, 2018 9:50 am
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soundofmind says...



Aah, I really wish I knew who to ask about Thorik!! I don't wanna see him dieeeee (I mean uh, be demoted to NPC)
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