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Tue Aug 08, 2017 11:48 pm
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Lefty says...



Since this first round has gone on for a little over three weeks now, I'm going to start the next round on Friday, so try to get your posts in before then (if you haven't posted already).

Those who still have yet to post are: Michael (@Dino), Emma (@HazelGrace16), Finn (@Oswin1800), Jinx & Charlotte (@Wolfical), Neon (@Chaser), Cassandra (@Veni), and Jaye (@AstralHunter).

You are all welcome to post whenever you like. I'd also like to point out that even if a post is a little bit out of sequence with the other posts that have been submitted, it's okay. It doesn't matter if they're a little out of order in the timeline. I'm looking forward to reading your posts!

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@Gravity, were you still planning to join? If so, you're still welcome to join in any time.
Hear me out, there's so much more to life than what you're feeling now. Someday you'll look back on all these days, and all this pain is gonna be invisible. - Hunter Hayes
  





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Wed Aug 09, 2017 12:20 am
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Europa says...



@LeftyWriter Here are the ones I'm considering

Deathstalker Scorpion

Polar Bear

Boomslang (It's a kind of snake)

Hyena

Leopard

Saltwater crocodile

Based on psychology and what his personality turns out to be, it could be any one of these.
  





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Wed Aug 09, 2017 1:46 am
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Steggy says...



I'll have a post ready by tonight or if I forget to post it, tomorrow whenever I wake up.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

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Wed Aug 09, 2017 3:42 pm
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I will be posting some time today.
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Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories.
It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.

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Thu Aug 10, 2017 8:14 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



One of the more depressing towns I've driven past. (It's just that you guys are writing about the old animorphers being arrested and I remembered that hey, there's a whole bunch of prisons, including a supermax prison, in the state of Colorado).
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Thu Aug 10, 2017 9:55 pm
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Wolfical says...



I've been a bit busy and I'm so behind. ;-; I expect to catch up on all the posts tonight, and write my post this week!
Romans 12:2:
Do not conform to the pattern of this world, but
be transformed by the renewing of your mind.

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Fri Aug 11, 2017 2:10 am
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Europa says...



@Dino the Animorphers don't know about the new Morphers yet. Only the lab. The new morphers are probably safe inside the new lab by now. Also I see your writing Michael in first person this time. Good choice!
  





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Fri Aug 11, 2017 2:46 am
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Steggy says...



Ah, thank you for pointing that out! I didn't realize that and thank you; I changed it up a bit, mainly because I think it'll be helpful on showing his emotions better, I guess.
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Fri Aug 11, 2017 6:44 pm
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Europa says...



Okay uh...I can't make Riley's banner to work correctly. A little help please?
  





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Fri Aug 11, 2017 6:59 pm
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Lefty says...



@Europa Hmm... That's odd. It's possible there are some extra spaces in the code, based on looking at the code on the SB (like, the last [/img] is a line down from the rest). I don't know if that matters though.

You can also try pasting this into the top of your post:

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Sat Aug 12, 2017 2:52 am
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Europa says...



Awesome! Thanks, Lefty. Unfortunately my computer broke, and my tablet won't let me copy this code so it might be a while until this is fixed. It's only been a day and I already miss my laptop...
  





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Sun Aug 13, 2017 1:44 am
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Lefty says...



@Europa No worries. It stinks when your computer breaks. :/ Hopefully you'll be able to get a new one soon!

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Great posts @Dino and @Oswin1800! I can tell that Finn is going to be a fun character to read and I'm looking forward to reading more of Michael in 1st-person!

And with those posts, I think that concludes Round 1, which means...

~~ROUND 1 HAS CLOSED~~


And...

~~ROUND 2 HAS NOW BEGUN~~


:D Yay posts.:D
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Sun Aug 13, 2017 5:51 am
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Wolfical says...



So sorry for my tardiness! I'm having difficulty finding enough time to read and post, but I'm really really enjoying reading these posts - they're of the highest quality. Great work guys! I think I have a free day Monday, so if I don't post by then you're all welcome to spam my wall with animal gifs.

EDIT: TUESDAY. It shall be done TUESDAY.
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Sun Aug 13, 2017 1:20 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



@LeftyWriter, is there any specific topic we have to cover during round two that would warrant a storybook challenge, or do we just continue with the introductory posts?
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
- Paul the Apostle

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Sun Aug 13, 2017 3:36 pm
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Lefty says...



No worries, @Wolfical! I'm looking forward to reading your post when you're able to post it. :)

@AstralHunter For round two, the new Animorphers will probably be brought into the facility and be given clean clothes, food, meet each other, etc... But I'm thinking them actually going into the chairs should wait until the next round.

For the original Animorphers, this round will probably be about them in custody, being interrogated and being broken out by the rebel group.

I'm not sure how much should happen with the original Animorphers. It seems like a lot, but I'm trying to get them caught up to being able to rescue the new ones, which is why my posts have been so long. I feel like I've been hogging the story a bit, which I feel bad about, so if you guys want to plan out which character writes which part of the capture & escape, I'd love to discuss it.
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