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Mon Aug 07, 2017 12:29 pm
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Sheytato says...



POST TORTELLINI
SAVE US FROM THIS DESOLATE WINTER OF POSTS
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In my eyes, all potatoes are equal.


...Except sweet potatoes.

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Mon Aug 07, 2017 12:32 pm
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Tortwag says...



FUHOHOHOHOHOHOHO

YOUR WISH SHALL BE GRANTED.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Mon Aug 07, 2017 12:32 pm
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saentiel says...



I still want to keep this SB going, if the other members of it are still interested!
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Mon Aug 07, 2017 12:34 pm
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Tortwag says...



At least 4 of us are here, so there's at least that.

*fetches post scheme* ...Oh. It's complete. *chuckles* Welp, I'll start writing, then.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
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Mon Aug 07, 2017 12:48 pm
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Kays says...



Hehe, I'm sure others will also jump on board as we revive Rogue! That's four of us so far.

I'm excited that we're digging this out of the dirt. I still love my character for this so I can't wait to write more for her!

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Mon Aug 07, 2017 12:55 pm
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Lumi says...



I'll try to read and conjure some ideas for Andreau. @saentiel you should throw your thoughts at me about the kingdom and the lore and the political (in)stability.
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Mon Aug 07, 2017 1:09 pm
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Do you want me to send them to you via PM or post about it here?
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Mon Aug 07, 2017 1:22 pm
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@Kays That's totally what I meant, but you phrased like a champ, so you get the cookies.

@Lumi Yay! Good luck!
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Mon Aug 07, 2017 1:28 pm
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Lumi says...



@saentiel --> post it hurr
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Mon Aug 07, 2017 1:50 pm
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Alright! I admittedly don't have too much of this world planned out - I was thinking we could all take part in it. But I do know a little bit about the kingdom and the political instability.

People in this world have always been able to use magic. Unlike in our world, they never forgot. Power isn't always related to someone's magic, but it often is. For example, the kingdom was created by a very powerful Rogue magic user somewhere around six hundred years ago.

The current instability is that the people of the kingdom are starting to see it as behind the other areas of the world, and they blame the royalty for the lack of progression. They also believe that a change in leadership is needed, having seen that democracies help out neighboring areas more. This has been a problem since before the current king came to power, but it seems to have reached its peak during his reign. It's unclear if it's because of how he rules or if people have been wanting change for far too long.

How does that sound?
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Mon Aug 07, 2017 2:26 pm
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Lumi says...



It sounds like Andreau having anxieties about ruling his people are well-placed. 8D

This could either drive him to be a lovable political martyr, or an out-of-touch luxury icon that will lead to political revolution a la the storming of the winter palace!
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Tue Aug 08, 2017 4:21 am
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CoffeeCat says...



I'm still heerrreeeee ;P
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Thu Aug 10, 2017 11:08 pm
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Tortwag says...



One good quarter of a post: completed! I should be done by the end of the week, if all goes well.
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And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Sat Aug 12, 2017 3:16 pm
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I am double-posting for the sake of announcing that I HAZ POSTED! FUHOHOHOHO!


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"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answer... to these questions."
  





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Wed Aug 16, 2017 12:42 pm
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Kelpies says...



I'm back. Sorry for not being here.
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