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Mon Mar 06, 2017 3:54 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



(I was thinking about writing something in my spare time today, if that's fine. <.< )
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Mon Mar 06, 2017 4:08 pm
Steggy says...



Ah, I'll wait until @TheSilverFox writes a post.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

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Tue Mar 07, 2017 2:30 am
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Oh boy, I don't know, man.

If I don't get distracted, expect a post this week or weekend. Depends on when I do write it xP
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

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Fri Mar 10, 2017 1:01 am
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Lumi says...



A lightning bolt hit me, so I struck out a post to move us into chapter two, which I think will be a lot more momentous.

Three things I want to happen as we continue:

1. The introduction of Natalia the poet, a friend of V's
2. V leaving home to search for Alexei now that he's either hallucinated or gotten confirmation from the souls that he's alive.
3. Unreliable narrator continues.
  





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Sat Mar 11, 2017 12:18 pm
Sheyren says...



Posted! It didn't move the story along too much, but brought Natalia into it.
Curiousity killed the cat, but answers would have harmed him more.
  





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Mon Mar 13, 2017 9:46 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



The totally true possible ending to V. :P

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S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Mon Mar 13, 2017 10:48 pm
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Oh hey. I'm working on a post for this and most likely will have it done byyyy tomorrow (since I'm going to be gone for three days.)
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

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Mon Mar 20, 2017 9:58 pm
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I suddenly felt the urge to post, and post I did!
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Mon Mar 20, 2017 11:28 pm
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Lumi says...



Who thinks there's a weak spot somewhere? Like.

Say there are five churches near the slums and he painted Beauty is a universal thing near each of them except one, where he painted another message indicating frailty nearby.
  








"In my contact with people I find that, as a rule, it is only the little, narrow people who live for themselves, who never read good books, who do not travel, who never open up their souls in a way to permit them to come into contact with other souls -- with the great outside world."
— Booker T. Washington, Up From Slavery