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Mon Mar 06, 2017 3:51 pm
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Lumi says...



A week of radio silence. @Steggy, wanna give it a shot?
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon
  





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Mon Mar 06, 2017 3:54 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



(I was thinking about writing something in my spare time today, if that's fine. <.< )
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Mon Mar 06, 2017 4:01 pm
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I will bow down to you if you do. ;u;
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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Mon Mar 06, 2017 4:08 pm
Steggy says...



Ah, I'll wait until @TheSilverFox writes a post.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

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Tue Mar 07, 2017 2:19 am
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Lumi says...



That was incredible, Fox Not In Canada Whatsoever.

TOP IT @Steggy HE CALLED YOU OUT
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Tue Mar 07, 2017 2:30 am
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Oh boy, I don't know, man.

If I don't get distracted, expect a post this week or weekend. Depends on when I do write it xP
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

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Fri Mar 10, 2017 1:01 am
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Lumi says...



A lightning bolt hit me, so I struck out a post to move us into chapter two, which I think will be a lot more momentous.

Three things I want to happen as we continue:

1. The introduction of Natalia the poet, a friend of V's
2. V leaving home to search for Alexei now that he's either hallucinated or gotten confirmation from the souls that he's alive.
3. Unreliable narrator continues.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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Sat Mar 11, 2017 12:18 pm
Sheytato says...



Posted! It didn't move the story along too much, but brought Natalia into it.
-=-=>[¤]<=-=-

In my eyes, all potatoes are equal.


...Except sweet potatoes.

-=-=>[¤]<=-=-

Formerly Sheyren, Sheyren, and even once I was Sheyren
  





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Sat Mar 11, 2017 5:18 pm
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Image


dat rug jerk tho
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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Mon Mar 13, 2017 9:46 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



The totally true possible ending to V. :P

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S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Mon Mar 13, 2017 10:38 pm
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I confess to nothing.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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Mon Mar 13, 2017 10:48 pm
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Steggy says...



Oh hey. I'm working on a post for this and most likely will have it done byyyy tomorrow (since I'm going to be gone for three days.)
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)

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Tue Mar 14, 2017 12:38 am
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Image

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because Volody's camera
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
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Mon Mar 20, 2017 9:58 pm
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Sheytato says...



I suddenly felt the urge to post, and post I did!
-=-=>[¤]<=-=-

In my eyes, all potatoes are equal.


...Except sweet potatoes.

-=-=>[¤]<=-=-

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Mon Mar 20, 2017 11:28 pm
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Lumi says...



Who thinks there's a weak spot somewhere? Like.

Say there are five churches near the slums and he painted Beauty is a universal thing near each of them except one, where he painted another message indicating frailty nearby.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon
  








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