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The Curse of the Wyvern [DT]



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Sun Sep 10, 2017 3:06 am
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Feltrix says...



Just to be clear, Ker isn't dead. He does need an eyepatch, though.
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?


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Sun Sep 10, 2017 9:30 am
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Sheyren says...



Nice post!
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Sun Sep 10, 2017 10:32 am
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Saen says...



I liked your post, @Feltrix!
“When given the choice between
being right or being kind,
choose kind.”

Wonder, RJ Palacio
  





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Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:29 am
Sheyren says...



Great post, @FalconryGirl9086! Nice to see Bran :-* ally use that bone knife!
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Fri Sep 15, 2017 1:47 pm
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Featherstone says...



Thanks! I just suddenly realized she never used the soul-tear and was like "I refuse to have this awesome necromancer never even use her most major badassarie" so I went ahead and did it :P

Almost raised an undead wyvern instead tho XD

Also claiming those points.
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Fri Sep 15, 2017 2:02 pm
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Sheyren says...



Head on over here to claim them! ^ ^
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Fri Sep 15, 2017 2:34 pm
Saen says...



I loved your post, Fea! It was so cool to read.
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Wonder, RJ Palacio
  





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Fri Sep 15, 2017 8:22 pm
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Sheyren says...



Sweet post, @Lumi! The background track was a great pick.
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Fri Sep 15, 2017 8:33 pm
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Saen says...



Shey is writing up the last post now and I'm trying not to cry and simultaneously cackle in glee at the thought of this finally ending.
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Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:54 pm
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Sheyren says...



The final post is up.

Eight months ago, I created a storybook. At the time, I just wanted to get an idea I had onto paper. I never expected it to have been so successful, and I certainly never expected it would be completed. I'd like to say something I did caused this miracle to happen, but in reality, that's not the case.

This was only completed because a group of loyal participants happened to join. I couldn't do it without any of you. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for helping me breath life into this story idea.

I am currently working on a sequel. It will be posted very soon. Of course, you will all be welcome to join it, if you want to.

Once again, thank you so much. Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to go find that other box of tissues.
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Fri Sep 15, 2017 11:03 pm
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Saen says...



SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL

I'm totally not crying right now.
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Sat Sep 16, 2017 12:39 am
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Nal'tor joining up again to protect the kingdom as head of the magical order? Sounds like fun! Pushing paper would get boring for him eventually. XD
  





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Fri Oct 13, 2017 6:42 am
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AstralHunter says...



Challenged Adventurer(s): @Sheytato, @Lumi, @saentiel, @FalconryGirl9086, @Feltrix, @XxXTheSwordsmanXxX
Storybook: The Curse of the Wyvern
The Challenge: We have finally reached the finale, and for the past 8 months, you've all been dedicated writers. And so, I've decided that, to honor the hard work you've put into actually completing a storybook, you will earn four points upon posting your final battle post.
Completion Time: One post for each adventurer challenged.
Credits Awarded: Four points.

Congratulations on completing your storybook! Commiserations on its... well. At least it disappeared in peace!
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Fri Oct 13, 2017 11:48 am
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Feltrix says...



Oh, uh, can I still claim those points (I'm really bad about that.)
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Sheyren says...



I would say yes, since you completed it before the expiration. @BrumalHunter gets the final say, though.
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