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Tue Nov 22, 2016 5:35 am
NicolMemo says...



Just starting it wouldn't be so hurt.
Beware of suspicion, for suspicion is the worst of false tales.
To overcome evil with good is good, to resist evil by evil is evil.
The ink of the scholar is more sacred than the blood of the martyr.

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Mon Nov 28, 2016 1:31 am
LadyEvvy says...



Agreed, I think we'll be alright if we start now, and leave it open to more people later on. @KiraThePotatoChip, you're sort of our guide here, so whenever you want to start, we can all follow suit!
  





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Thu Jan 12, 2017 5:20 pm
KiraThePotatoChip says...



After much procrastination and pain, the Eclipse Circus is now started! Apologies on taking so long, I was terribly busy, bored, and sometimes angry at not being able to write a good opening. Lets get the ball rolling back on this StoryBook, and make the most of it after much delay!
Νεχ ποσσυμ τεχυμ ωιωερε, νεχ σινε τε.
Nec possum tecum vivere, nec sine te.
Spoiler! :
I can live neither with you, nor without you.
  





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Fri Jan 13, 2017 2:46 pm
NicolMemo says...



Let's see how it will unfold. Expect my post soon. (I really hope I have time for this before the school starts again which is tomorrow.)
Beware of suspicion, for suspicion is the worst of false tales.
To overcome evil with good is good, to resist evil by evil is evil.
The ink of the scholar is more sacred than the blood of the martyr.

Muhammad SAW
  





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Mon Jan 16, 2017 6:36 pm
featherstone9086 says...



Can I join?
“It don’t matter if it’s futile. Regardless, we fight- not because we think we can win, but ‘cause we’ve got no other choice. I’d rather die fighting for what I believe than givin’ up ‘cause of statistics. Who cares about them anyways?”
- Tasha Hunter
  





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Mon Jan 16, 2017 9:50 pm
KiraThePotatoChip says...



@featherstone9086 But of course!
Νεχ ποσσυμ τεχυμ ωιωερε, νεχ σινε τε.
Nec possum tecum vivere, nec sine te.
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I can live neither with you, nor without you.
  





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Fri Feb 17, 2017 12:33 am
KiraThePotatoChip says...



I'm just gonna casually poke this.
Νεχ ποσσυμ τεχυμ ωιωερε, νεχ σινε τε.
Nec possum tecum vivere, nec sine te.
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I can live neither with you, nor without you.
  





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Fri Feb 17, 2017 4:21 pm
NicolMemo says...



Haha.
I really want to write something, but idk why I don't start it yet. Give me a plot based on the story you have in your mind and based on my character. Maybe I can do magic?
Beware of suspicion, for suspicion is the worst of false tales.
To overcome evil with good is good, to resist evil by evil is evil.
The ink of the scholar is more sacred than the blood of the martyr.

Muhammad SAW
  





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Fri Feb 17, 2017 5:03 pm
KiraThePotatoChip says...



As far as the story goes, there are really two factions at constant war. That would be the members of the Eclipse, and the "Assassins". This has been going on for some time, and shall continue to happen throughout history. Characters can do anything, be anything, one of you could be Jack the Ripper because of the era. After the performance, I would anticipate the assassins would make a move against us.
Νεχ ποσσυμ τεχυμ ωιωερε, νεχ σινε τε.
Nec possum tecum vivere, nec sine te.
Spoiler! :
I can live neither with you, nor without you.
  





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Fri Feb 17, 2017 5:08 pm
NicolMemo says...



Yeah,
I'm having quite a problem on deciding the setting of where the performance is.

Like, if I am to write an opening of my character; I don't know where would she stand.
Beware of suspicion, for suspicion is the worst of false tales.
To overcome evil with good is good, to resist evil by evil is evil.
The ink of the scholar is more sacred than the blood of the martyr.

Muhammad SAW
  





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Fri Feb 17, 2017 8:31 pm
KiraThePotatoChip says...



The tent would be fairly large, and the seats for the audience are raised enough for them to see the entire floor, so placement would not matter too much, but if you were to do magic or something of the sort, the best spot might be up close to the audience.
Νεχ ποσσυμ τεχυμ ωιωερε, νεχ σινε τε.
Nec possum tecum vivere, nec sine te.
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I can live neither with you, nor without you.
  





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Fri Feb 17, 2017 8:44 pm
regismare says...



This looks really interesting! Can I join?
awaiting world war three
  





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Fri Feb 17, 2017 10:28 pm
KiraThePotatoChip says...



@regismare Of course, just submit a character profile and wait for it to be approved, and you'll be in!
Νεχ ποσσυμ τεχυμ ωιωερε, νεχ σινε τε.
Nec possum tecum vivere, nec sine te.
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I can live neither with you, nor without you.
  





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Sat Feb 18, 2017 7:47 pm
regismare says...



@KiraThePotatoChip CP submitted! I'm not sure if he's creepy enough - if not, just say and I'll change it : )
awaiting world war three
  





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Thu Feb 23, 2017 7:51 pm
featherstone9086 says...



@KiraThePotatoChip: CP submitted!
“It don’t matter if it’s futile. Regardless, we fight- not because we think we can win, but ‘cause we’ve got no other choice. I’d rather die fighting for what I believe than givin’ up ‘cause of statistics. Who cares about them anyways?”
- Tasha Hunter
  








The good ended happily, and the bad unhappily. That is what Fiction means.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest