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Wed Jan 04, 2017 9:08 pm
AstralHunter says...



Same drill as usual.

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Wed Jan 04, 2017 11:45 pm
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Sandbox is the only true option. Everyone is mislead -o-
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Thu Jan 05, 2017 3:03 am
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Okay, I actually managed to convert it to an mp3 and get it on mediafire without much error - somehow. With my luck, that's exceptional. XD

Yeah, enjoy the song! It's definitely not perfect, and I do slip up a few times, but I hope all this effort was worth it. And I don't usually have sheet music, so I'd have to apologize for that, @AstralHunter. It's mostly because of the fact that a. the song is always entirely in my head, b. I never play it the same twice (mostly because that gives me a chance to come up with new ideas and revise the song as necessary), and c. I'm not good with sheet music. At all.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/y3ye446crcznkxs/Song_Attempt.mp3
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Thu Jan 05, 2017 4:08 am
Poopsie says...



i cant read when it comes to music x3.

Its very original, and i like what you did with the scaling-ish thing on the right hand. Did you make all the chords up by yourself
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Fri Jan 06, 2017 10:40 pm
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@Poopsie: Well, usually, when I come up with a song, I base it partly off of another one that I might be playing at the time - usually the scale. So I have one in A minor that was inspired by Fur Elise, although the song itself is quite separate. However, in this case, I was just experimenting with different scales and thought I'd like to try and make a song in B major. So yeah, all the chords are my own, although I tend to move up and down the keys with my right hand in a lot of my songs. Habit, I guess. :P
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Fri Jan 06, 2017 11:50 pm
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AstralHunter says...



@TheSilverFox, apparently, my brother thinks it sounds like a horror song at the start. I, however, like how you change pace from slow to animated after about a minute and a half. Overall, I think it's a laudable effort. I like it. Well done!
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Mon Jan 09, 2017 4:31 am
Ventomology says...



Yo hey everyone!

So the post is pretty much written and done (I am supposed to be writing flood stuff, yeah? It's been a while since I legitimately talked to any of you about this.) I just need to run a few questions by Robusto and/or Hunter and make sure I'm remembering things correctly.

Anyways, my primary excuse for not finishing sooner is that when I wasn't cleaning my grandparents' house, I was out with two middle-aged ladies who haven't seen each other in three years. I think we all know where that can lead. Also, holy cow the internet at my grandparents' house was sketch.

Yeah. I have a number of snow delays/cancellations coming up this week, so I'll be available more often to talk plot and... whatever it is we want to talk about. (Y'all might have heard about flooding in Cali? Same system up here, only it hasn't gotten above freezing all week.)

That's it from me! I'll be hanging around if anyone needs me.
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Mon Jan 09, 2017 4:51 am
StupidSoup says...



lolwut flooding in Cali? That's only because our storm drains are all filled up with dead plants.

Also heres this. Realized leads were not an option (sorreh silv).

http://vocaroo.com/delete/s15R7ompHGBF/d65c54d6d8fc2b3e
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Mon Jan 09, 2017 5:08 am
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Wed Jan 11, 2017 12:22 am
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Now that the chatbar is dead, we need a place for long plotting sessions. Should someone create a WFP?
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Wed Jan 11, 2017 6:51 am
Poopsie says...



down for anything.

Review this for money ->>> The Time Traveler's Dillema
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Wed Jan 11, 2017 2:40 pm
AstralHunter says...



The pad for future discussion is here . The password is "arceus", since apparently nobody uses capitalisation in their passwords. The link will for future reference be on the DT's first page.
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Sat Jan 14, 2017 10:33 pm
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TheSilverFox says...



Yay, I've been playing SSB4 matches against three level 9 CPUs in stock matches without items, and winning about half the time. I'm not completely bad at this game. :P
S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
a persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per ciò che giammai di questo fondo
non tornò vivo alcun, s'i' odo il vero,
senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo.

Inferno, Canto 27, l 61-66.
  





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Sun Jan 15, 2017 12:39 pm
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Tortwag says...



Distant smile Aah... The kind of talk that makes me itching for a fight...! Gotta pick up my dear Yoshi again...
...wait a second I haven't even commented on your music yet! I'M LATE ON EVERYTHING, ARRRRGH

@AstralHunter thank you for the link, by the way.
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Sun Jan 15, 2017 10:45 pm
Robusto says...



In a sense, Zero has already been introduced in this little SB. But I wonder who he is?
  








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