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Sat Sep 11, 2010 3:58 pm
TheGreatIthy says...



Hey there, YWS!

I have been here for a little while and have given some reviews here and there, but I think I work better when someone is specifically asking for a review. Gives me a reason to put aside time for that. I am currently in university, so don't be offended if it takes a couple days before I do review something requested but if that does happen I'll be sure to message you at least so you know that I did see your post and will review in the near future.

Here is what I will review!

Scripts ---> 9 years of experience in reading, acting, directing, ect. so preferred section.
Action/Adventure
Science Fiction
Fantasy
Fan Fiction ---> Don't be surprised if I hadn't heard of source material. General public impressions.

I cannot review/not very good at:
Lyrics
Poetry
Art and Photos

I will prefer if you can post a link just so it will make it easier for me to get to the story.

Can't wait to see your works!! :smt003
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Thu Sep 30, 2010 9:20 pm
Calligraphy says...



Will you review my poem for school? It doesn't have a name. :D I know that you said you won't review poetry, but you don't have ny requests yet so I thought that you might. Plus, if you don't want to I still bumped your thread up.

Thanks a bunch,

A. S.
  





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Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:20 am
screamandshout says...



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Hey would you mind reveiwing this for me? Please and thank you.
  





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Thu Oct 07, 2010 11:32 am
TheGreatIthy says...



Done and done! 8)
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Thu Oct 07, 2010 10:30 pm
jDawn says...



Hey, would you mind reviewing "Hatched Chapter One" for me? Thanks in advance! post770582.html#p770582
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3
  





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Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:21 pm
Celticmusicgirl says...



would you mind reviewing my twilight daga fanfic i don't have a title yet but i just want to get some opinions on it topic70355
"No life is forever. We found and fought here. We loved and died here... The crops whither and the bones of hunger walk the sunken roads... The land has failed us... In dance and song we gift and mourn our children. They carry us over the ocean in dance and song.
-American Wake by Riverdance
  





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Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:50 pm
TheGreatIthy says...



Done! :D
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Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:40 pm
jDawn says...



Wonderin' if you could review my revision of Hatched? topic70899.html

Thanks in advance!
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:38 am
Roal says...



I wonder if you can make this review for me so yeah :L

Here is my first chapter of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer:
topic70833.html
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  





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Thu Oct 21, 2010 3:58 pm
TheGreatIthy says...



Done and Done! Very good writings!
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:36 am
IgnisandGlacialis says...



Hiya!
When you have the time, could you please review this for me? It is the first part of my fantasy novel, White Eyes.
viewtopic.php?t=69991
Thank you so much in advance,
Ignis :pirate3:
The POTATO of DOOM

A thousand times it calls your name
A thousand times you hear it
And fools are those who heed its call
But fools are those who fear it.


The Interesting Thoughts of Edward Monkton
  





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Sun Oct 24, 2010 1:02 pm
napalmerski says...



This one please: post776881.html#p776881
I'm begging for reviews because I'm really uncertain. Was it a good idea to compress a novel into a novella length while retaining the structure of a novel proper? Does a YA a sci-fi thriller suffer or gain from scattered descriptions, simplified psychological portraits and constant point of view jumping? I need someone to tell meeeee :mrgreen:
Thanx in advance
she got a dazed impression of a whirling chaos in which steel flashed and hacked, arms tossed, snarling faces appeared and vanished, and straining bodies collided, rebounded, locked and mingled in a devil's dance of madness.
Robert Howard
  





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Thu Oct 28, 2010 3:23 pm
spike71294 says...



Need a review for my poem- Memory Of You
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Sun Oct 31, 2010 8:43 pm
iGlamour says...



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Hey, please review this. It's just a short prologue, and I'm new-ish to writing so I'd really appreciate any help and advice that I can get. Thanks!
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And Voldy's gone moldy, so now let's have fun!

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Mon Nov 01, 2010 1:04 am
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Can you take a look at my story? If you can get to it tonight, I'd be forever grateful, but if not, that's okay too.

viewtopic.php?t=71380

Thanks in advance,
-Addict
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