Young Writers Society

I like the plot of this series, but I can't get past the endless exposition, as if the author thinks we can't remember 100 pages back. Lasky, I'm only glad Rise of a Legend had less exposition. And was about Ezylryb because he's awesome.

It's cool. I love Sunflash, but this book was the closest it got to just plain out Redwallian racism. He's a ferret. He's evil. Period. NO! It ended up being that he was just spiteful and admittedly angsty, and sacrifices his own life, standing up to his father, just to let the girl that raised him live. Five seconds later, said girl that raised him calls him a vile creature and she shouldn't have bothered raising him. Wh-What?

First. LoTR was boring. The hobbit was cool, but I couldn't even finish the Fellowship of the Ring. I even tried Game of Thrones, despite having been scarred for life by the first episode. It was better than this.

Shade was an awesome character. He had such development through Silverwing and Sunwing. Then he has a kid. Somehow, this guy turns into a idiot. The son doesn't even get the brains. Like the way he flies with a short branch of fire and drops it on his best friend's head, killing her? Either he was just dumb or Luna was too stupid to live. Then Griffin gets sucked into the underworld. Shade, being a true hero, goes in after his son. Then the Climax. It's epic. Goth and Shade fight epically, and then when it is done, Shade kills himself to revive Goth and Luna. What? There's such a thing as natural selection, Shade. Luna was too stupid, so you kill yourself to revive her? No. You should kill yourself and then Griff takes half your spirit and you get the other half. This book's saving grace was Java.