Young Writers Society

Life is full of joy,
But I don't know why everybody think that girl is a toy,
In first phase of her life,
She has to suffer for the fear of her survival,
Everyone treats her as rival,
Some an how her parents protected her life
and save her from taking an horrorful dive,( referring to a custom of rural areas in which whenever a girlchild was born she was killed .Villagers collect at sea shore and she was drowned there. )
But if she would be inside the water
then her legs start requesting to protect her
because she was unable to speak
and also to give a preach ,
This shows that people have mentality as sick
but why nobody give these rituals a kick.

Her second phase started with going to school ,
But it was for two days how cruel !!!
parents think that going to school is a wastage of time,
But why nobody tells them that preventing her from going to school is a crime,
Putting her behind bars of four walls
and taking away her several dolls,
Telling her to be a labour
and saying there so called statement that they are in her favour ,
By giving her freedom of eating
don't you think it's a cheating,
You are not allowing her free to move
and giving her a groom,
She accepted her life as worker ,
Now you are thinking that she is a rubber,
You can stretch her in any way
and you are satisfied Hurray !!!
But rubber also has a limit to stretch ,
otherwise it will give you a scratch ,
Some and how she finish this phase
and start to find new ways to live her life .

Her third phase started with a hope
to open up these rope ,
But suddenly a new terror arises
it was security crisis ,
Her hope became going down
but she wears a cruel crown
to protect her from this hell
as she came out of her shell ,
She started raising her voice
and cried out with a sharp noise,
That don't try to depress me
and went out from a home to be a powerful she,
Now girls are self dependent
and able to be dominant ,
But she believes in equality
and to be protected from this cruelity .

Now what the next phase ,
But now she is brave
and can save her from going to grave,
She can make her own way
and built a new ray ,
In the world suffering from crime ,
but I am proud that now women's security is prime

Uh, hi there. Just so you know, all creative works are usually posted through the Publishing Centre, which is the farthest right option on the black bar at the top. From there works go to the Green Room, where they'll be until they get at least two reviews. This means you can make sure to get feedback on your work, because other people want to review works to get points to post works etc etc. You are welcome to post your poetry in the forums if you want, but this is just to let make sure you're aware that you're unlikely to get much feedback on your works if you post them in this way.

But there is no such option at the top ...plz help

Hi there, maybe I could help out.

To publish a work, go to the top of your screen (On the black colored bar) you'll see the titles "Me" / "Messages" / "New" / etc. click on the link that says "Publishing Center" then click the red button that says "Add New Work" then you'll be able to type in or copy/paste your poem and at the end make sure to click "Publish" at the bottom.

If you have any trouble with the formatting, you can click "edit" and then use the codes from this article: How to Format Poetry to help preserve the spaces. But hopefully everything copies and pastes correctly. Best of luck with your poetry writing!