Young Writers Society

Hey all.

I'm just going to make this so I can put poems up every once in a while that I think are interesting or important to read. Basically if I end up actually liking it, it might end up here.

Please put up YWS poems you think other YWSers should read too. Do not put up your own poems.

If you're looking for a format, here is one.

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[URL to poem] is by @[username].
[Reason for suggesting the poem].
[Method of discovery].

I just read This Old Man @Purple's poem about his/her dad. It was really touching and hard to ignore. She/he did a great job of getting details into the poem like the cracked hands which open up the poem. It really reminds me of Theodore Roethke's poem, "My Papa's Waltz" with a combination of "Those Winter Sundays" by Robert Hayden. This one just took a darker twist to the whole fatherly love thing.

Empty House/Men Like Candles is by @persy

She is talented and worked hard at writing poetry. This one in particular has more emotion in it then I've ever seen a poem have

My Body is Not Poetry by @vitamere and Darwin by @Adnamarine. Such beautiful pieces.

The Thoughts of a Used Juice Box by @megsug is one of the poems that I've loved for a long time now. I found it when this shy creature happened across my Poetry Exchange and it just enthrawled me with the creative, innovative, unique and powerful metaphor.

The Overlooked and Underestimated by @Isha is amazing. Like, really really amazing. (trigger warning)

I really liked Seven signs of insanity by @Pompadour (and everything else she writes).

This poem tracing bedsheets by @verymaryanna is beautiful. The use of alliteration, refrains, and symbolism is something quite unique. It flows very well and reads like a charm.

i. by @nycto.

His style is smooth and sweet and it allows you to analyze beyond author's intention, which is rare and beautiful.

Grey Sweater by @jumpingsheep

It's a really well written poem.
I saw it in the Green Room and I think you guys should see it too.

This poem by @Lumi is fabulous - work/Lumi/i-have-no-choice-but-to-love-139629?c=644264#c644264

I just got around to reviewing it, and wow there's just some really beautiful lines in there. Check it out if you want!

Deep Sea Darling is by @soundofmind.
This is an amazing lyrical poem and it also has a recording of soundofmind singing it! It's in the Literary Spotlight right now too.

I recently read this poem: let me be hope by @CoffeeCat and it is one of my favorites I've read this month!

Really interesting read, with some neat contrasting water/sky imagery and word choice that'll take you on twists and turns. Definitely worth the read and taking an attempt at deciphering! Check it out if you have a chance!

Let's get this thread moving again?

Two good poems you might like to read by a newer YWSer @envy
somethingthatmatters
thesweetness&thelight

They're dramatic and striking and I'm loving the style.

Another poem by @envy, everythingwasbeautiful&nothinghurt, because it is beautifully written and like @alliyah said, envy's poetry style is amazing.