I like the reviews that talk about what the writing needs to improve. Or what the person likes about tit. they didn't come here to have you yell at them about grammar, that's what schools for. and besides, when/if they publish it then they can worry about the grammar.
Someday, everything is going to go right for you, and it will be so wonderful you won't even know what to do. — Hannelore Ellicott-Chatham, Questionable Content
Gender:
Points: 13816
Reviews: 563