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Tue Nov 21, 2006 5:54 pm
x-Jammie-x says...



I need to write a 8 - 10 verse ballard for thursday and i have to do it about moving schools.

but i have no idea how to start it! any ideas? :(

ps. thanks in advance
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Wed Nov 29, 2006 3:18 pm
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lexy says...



moving schools? What a boring subject.
Try linking ideas of the contrast.
Say that one is nice and one is nasty and be really descriptive.

Honestly, you'll be fine, xxx
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 6:27 pm
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try writing one line about the old one, and one about the new one...maybe like this...
...Friends waiting in the hallways,
...Bullies chasing me always...
Idunno, u probably think its rubbish, dont worry if u dont like it, just trying to help! lol
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Mr. Everyone says...



you should go fiction with it make the schools interesting make one school on one planet where everything is chocolate and the other like a wizard school for example just to spice things up and make it easier to pull the creativity out of bordom
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