Hmm, I (sort of) posted this before but here goes.
PLOT: A story based off a very strange cumgalubalation (that's not a word!!!) of different anime type-ish plots. (Like, Angel Beats, Baccano, and Akira...???) Involving a futur-isc city of Ohiro (half Japanese, half American style) and its secrets. There are gangs here; one has immortal members, the other super powered members. They own the politics and have war-things occasionally.
Their existence is credited to something known as "Shield," a mysterious, radioactive (ish) stone-like object that holds incredible power. There used to be three "Shields," but now only one remains. A life line to the superhuman individuals, known as their "pulse." They have a connection to it, when that "pulse" or "line" ends, they perish.
The MC is a refugee named Ash, who flees to the city to hide from his "rebellious" past. He soon established a connection to "Shield," and from there things start to get hairy. (In other words, I don't have a plot past that point)
TITLE: Third Line Pulse
Well, please help me. How's the idea sound? Any plot ideas? Anything too confusing or weird? Maybe TOO similar to some animes you may be thinking of?
Feedback greatly appreciated, thanks.
~Elo
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