If you're reading a novel, how would you like this death scene to be put forward?
Let's say the protagonist is standing in front of an old blood stain and is remembering the dear person who got killed. How should I write it?
1-Standing there and merely describing how that person's corpse looked, when he was killed months ago? Like the physical description?
2-Remembering the whole situation, and telling the story of going in the room by accident and seeing the corpse and so on?
So, the whole death scene, or a mere description of the corpse and details come later? It's only chapter five and it's the first real detail about the death. What do you think? I know I'm the writer and I should decide this, but I do need opinions too.
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