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Enemies in crime



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Mon Oct 26, 2020 9:19 pm
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LadyMysterio says...



Im read writing my Enemies in Crime story, bc it need a proper plotline. I'll add more after school today
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Tue Oct 27, 2020 10:07 pm
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LadyMysterio says...



Alright, here's is the basic summary plot, of enemies in crime. I did at one point post some of this on here, but at the time I didn't really have a proper plot. I love the story though so I figured it deserved a reboot.

Zillah, I the villain of the story shes woken up one day ( in her kind of secret base) to the city being terrorized. but not by her. she goes to investigate to find this random guy with what ill call "force" powers. Soren, our superhero hasn't shown up at all. so zillah ends up taking on this force dude. Because while she's a villain, pushing down buildings full of people is just wrong.
she, gets her butt kicked. stumbled home. Soren finds her. she gest mad. later she decided to have another go at this dude. get her but kicked again.and ends up having to go to Soren for help. thought she hates the idea altogether. and ends up not asking him.

we then find out that force was a hired villain, but by who? and why?

that all for now bc I don't want to spoil the whole thing.
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Sun Nov 01, 2020 7:59 pm
LadyMysterio says...



yay! lets GOOOOOO Nano! so far I am loving the rewrite of my story.
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Sun Nov 01, 2020 10:17 pm
LadyMysterio says...



As I'm writing, I realize Zillah has full-on Gen Z energy and I love it.
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Tue Nov 03, 2020 3:20 am
LadyMysterio says...



I had to share a bit of dialogue I wrote because I love it.


“You coward, “she snarled,” won't fight me hand to hand.”

“I am fighting with my hands, im just making sure you can’t.”
I know my worth, anyone else opinion doesn't really matter
-Agent Carter
  








"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..."
— Gone With the Wind