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The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead



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The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead


Cover to be designed...aka this has elements that are unique enough that I need to custom design it and right now I have no time for that...cover due in November when I can get back to 3D modelling
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General Premise


The mother of all my stories...the umbrella storyline that is hopefully going to define my career as a writer...the most important story for me...and the largest one I will ever attempt...pretty sure it will take me my entire life to finish this bad boy because this series is destined to clock in at a whopping 22 installments...and each book will be a decent size. Its a world so stupidly ambitious that it took me four years to build and a story that has evolved for years but I think is finally ready to be told.

Here's how it all begins...

Those that can see the future are seeing a dark cloud...the daily criminal activity is on the rise and at a rate never seen before...in a nutshell everyone can sense that something bad is coming...and its coming fast.

And so they do what all superhero organizations do when faced with such a situation...immediately make a super team up film...I mean make a team of the best superheroes.

Read along as 17 unlikely teammates:

A immortal teenager...and his sister...
Their brother....also an immortal but kinda mature and all three have lived since the beginning of time.
A 300 year old retired immortal assassin
A 200 year old active immortal assassin
Two superpowered government agent twins
A master dimension jumper
A human
A mid level government agent
The Best Wizard in all the land
A super powered super soldier
A hacker
An archer...(this one has powers unlike Hawkeye)
A master teleporter
A retired genetically bred for war general
A vampire

(Don't worry there's only like 3-7 POV's...and...um...yes I am the immortal teenager...don't judge.)

They must learn how to align their very conflicting world views...the ridiculous gaps between their experiences and power levels and overall strategies...and don't forget the individual issues they have and while doing all of that...start by investigating the current biggest issue the world has...the dead are coming...and they absolutely refuse to go back to being dead.
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So for this one, I wanted to start out by detailing our main characters. There's quite a few of them although only a few of them will be POV characters. And also this one has a ridiculous amount of worldbuilding that I don't currently have the time to write down.

1. Tony James Bondark "James" | Agent Khaos
2. Raymond Dawn Sanders "Ray" | Hackzord
3. Dracula Edwin Cullen "Drac" | The Reaper
4. Keltian Alberto Guarium "Kelti" | Falcon X
5. Sean Ashton Argentum "Ash" | Quantax
6. Winston Lingard Schott "Win" | Icycle
7. Rustork Kogu Gaiyord "Rusty" | Frostfire
8. Steven Kinston Kinhawg "Steve" | The Reflector
9. Vankous Eon Frostification "Vankous" | Doctor Cerebro
10. Laurence Galahad Harrison "Larry" | Soundwave
11. Stean Sydney Stakes "Stean" | Lazerbeam
12. Shania Claudia Stakes "Shania" | Lazerburst
13. Tapusha Alvira Romero "Tappu" | Lightning Storm
14. Chudnofsky Leonov Maliachisinsky "Nofsky" | Captain Fusion
15. Jason Benjamin Hardy "Ben" | Hurricane Omega
16. Jennifer Rose Hardy "Jen" | Princess
17. Harrison Harvard Hardy "Harry" | The Darkness
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Sat Oct 31, 2020 1:26 pm
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Day 0


Daily Word Count

Survival: The Escape: 0/2500
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 0/1667
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 0/834


This is just a test run to make sure that this code is working properly.

Remaining Word Count for Target

Survival: The Escape: 75,000
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 50,000
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 25,000

Those are le targets for this NaNo...ahhh...we'll see how far we get.

Total Word Count of Story

Survival: The Escape: 0
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 18,135
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 0

This is where we begin for each story.

Remaining Word Count for Story Target

Survival: The Escape: 75,000
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 81,865
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 250,000

This is where its going to be ending for each story...
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Day 1


Daily Word Count

Survival: The Escape: 2,540/2500
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 1,725/1667
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 902/834

Remaining Word Count for Target

Survival: The Escape: 72,460
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 48,275
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 24,098

Total Word Count of Story

Survival: The Escape: 2,540
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 19,860
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 902

Remaining Word Count for Story Target

Survival: The Escape: 72,460
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 80,140
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 249,098

Things starting off with a bang in this one...

Favorite Bit for the Day

"So, are we gonna scram or stay and fight?" asked Jennifer.

"Hmm...what do you guys prefer," said Harry, sneaking a glance at the now uncomfortably close pirate fleet.

"Considering the fuel remaining, I would suggest we just get the heck outta here," said Jason, "unless you want to get off the ship and deal with this?"

"Yes. Now that's an idea," said Jennifer, "Harry, what do you think?"

"I second that," he said and the two exchanged a hi five.

"Are you two out of your minds?" said Ben.

"Yes," they both said in unison and promptly burst into laughter.

"Guys," he said, frowning at them.

"Oh look, he's using the big brother look of extreme disappointment, we're so scared," said Harry, pretending to shake with fear.

Ben rolled his eyes. "Honestly you two...oh crap!!"

"What?" said Harry, turning back again to see a large rail gun round heading for the ship.

"Holy Crap," he muttered, as he yanked the throttle, causing the ship to spin sideways. The large steel rod just barely missed them, throwing up a shower of sparks as it scratched up the heat shield.
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Day 2


Daily Word Count

Survival: The Escape: 2,635/2,500
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 1,829/1,667
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 880/834

Remaining Word Count for Target

Survival: The Escape: 69,825
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 46,446
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 23,218

Total Word Count of Story

Survival: The Escape: 5,175
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 21,689
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 1782

Remaining Word Count for Story Target

Survival: The Escape: 69,825
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 78,311
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 248,218

Favorite Bit of the Day

Space Battle in Progress as we get a sense of just how ridiculously powerful the three Hardy's are.

Harry braked rapidly in midair, throwing his hands up and using that to propel himself down rapidly, just about avoiding the five deadly streams of fire coming his way. Before they could sweep downward, he accelerated, getting under the lead starfighter and preventing the others from using their plasma canons.

The bottom mounted gun of the starfighter he was under swiveled around to point directly at his face. Dang. Outmaneuvered. Why do I always forget about the gun at the bottom? Giving himself a mental knock on the head, he casually grabbed the muzzle of the gun.

The gun fired.

The supersonic projectile rammed right into his hand. Blue veins along his arm glowed a bright dark cyan as the energy was absorbed and directed into his body along the veins. The energy snaked along the veins until it reached his chest where it flashed a brilliant blue and faded. The projectile fell back into the barrel, robbed of its energy and momentum. He pulled, ripping the gun right out of its mount. He propelled himself out from under the ship, flinging the torn off gun into the engine before swooping down towards the four other ships.
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Day 3


Daily Word Count

Survival: The Escape: 2,567/2500
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 1,717/1667
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 891/834

Remaining Word Count for Target

Survival: The Escape: 67,258
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 44,729
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 22,327

Total Word Count of Story

Survival: The Escape: 7,742
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 23,406
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 2,673

Remaining Word Count for Story Target

Survival: The Escape: 67,258
The Sorcerers of Hisderat: 76,594
The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead: 247,327

Favorite Bit:

Ahh...still in the first chapter for this one...xD...going at 800 words a day does that to ya. Opening Space Battle is over though...just need to wrap this chapter up now with some mystery...

And here's me trio just totally acting their age...

"This is TS Quagmire to unknown ship, please identify yourselves," said the monotonous modulated voice of whoever was currently piloting that ship.

"TS Quagmire, this is the Apricot Sundae," replied Harry. Ben put a palm to his head and leaned back with a sigh. Jennifer slapped a hand over her mouth to stop herself from bursting out laughing.

"Apricot Sun... wait a minute what?" said the voice. There was a beep and the voice of one Captain Sonotos came through the comms," Is that you Harry?"

"Busted," said Harry, smirking, "so....um...we're back."

Behind him, Ben banged his head on the chair repeatedly while Jennifer almost fell of her chair laughing.
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