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NaNo 18: Butterfly Chasers



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Tue Oct 30, 2018 12:19 am
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Oh this novel.

I'm currently at 32,780. My goal for NaNo is to finish. I'm shooting for 65,000, so 32220 for the month, which equates to 1074 per day.
I GOT THIS.

I'm in the middle. I planned virtually nothing before I started this novel. This novel is super depressing (part of why I had to take a break from it).

In short, it's a YA contemporary (coming of age) with themes of grief/loss, friendship, and identity. And pretty strong Christian themes. I've never written a non-romance novel before, so this probably good for me, but I obviously don't know how to arc if it's not a romance arc.

Using this thread to update progress, struggles, try to hype myself, etc.
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You've got this Carlito!
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


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Day One:

I've decided to listen to a full Christian album on each day of NaNo while I write and simply write for the duration of the album (while also hopefully using the album as inspiration?)

Album of the day: Look Up Child by Lauren Daigle
Rating: 10/10 - her voice is everything <3
Favorite songs: You Say; Everything
Most Meredith (MC) songs: Rescue; Look Up Child

Words today: 1078
Total NaNo words: 1078
Total novel word count: 33858

Thoughts while writing:
-How do I even start because I stopped at such a random place 2 1/2 months ago and what is even going on in this novel?
-I read the last chapter I wrote and maaaaaaaaan the feels. Like this doozy:
“I wasn’t in love with her or anything. I was just hoping that someday I’d have the chance to be.”

-Don't know what this next chapter is really going to be about but here goes nothing! :)
-Half-way through my goal for today and it's already a fight :p (the album is good though!)
-Lauren's voice is just <3 <3 <3 though
-400 more words uuuuuuggggggh (this is going great :p)
-Well this scene took a turn I wasn't expecting. This is what I enjoy about not planning first drafts :)
-Made it! :D


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Day Two:

Album of the day: Own It by Francesca Battistelli
Rating: 8.5/10
Favorite songs: The Breakup Song, This could change everything
Most Meredith song: As good as it gets

Words today: 1086
Total NaNo words: 2164
Total novel word count: 34,944

Thoughts while writing:
-procrastinated until 10:30pm to start because I don't know what's happening
-I was going to save this until tomorrow, but I think I'm going to start the Extreme Harry Potter word crawl!
-Okay this word crawl really is a game-changer! I'm writing way faster than I thought I would. Whether or not it's any good is another story but oh well :p
-I got my wand from Ollivander! Tomorrow I'll pick out my pet and see how far I get after that!
-And made it! :D Glad I sucked it up and started writing!
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Day Three:

I knew I should have planned ahead yesterday morning and wrote earlier in the day because boy and I had dinner plans with friends last night. Well, I didn't do that and I didn't get home until 11:30, so no writing :p
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Day Four:

Album of the day: Burn the Ships by For King & Country
Rating: 9/10
Favorite song: Burn the ships; Control
Most Meredith song: God Only Knows; Need you more

Double duty since I missed yesterday -
Album of the day: Unleashed by Skillet
Rating: 12/10 <3
Favorite song: Stars <3 (One of my all-time favorite songs); Lions; Watching for Comets; Brave
Most Meredith song: Out of hell; Stay till the daylight

Words today: 2151
Total NaNo words: 4315
Total novel word count: 37,092

Thoughts while writing:
-I'm going to break this up and do one session now and one session later during the write-in to make up for yesterday.
-The HP word crawl plus listening to an album is really doing wonders for my motivation :)
-I had to take a break towards the end of album 1 because I hit a wall. I'm boarding the train and I had to write a lot of words :p
-Okay I'm back to writing now that I've taken a long break!
-Skillet <3 <3 <3
-I got to Hogwarts and ate a chocolate frog! (In the word crawl :p) I'm almost done with this chapter and I have 0 ideas for what happens next #panster 8)
-jamming to Skillet in my chair <3 (shhhh I'm not distracted I promise!)
-quick break to change out my laundry and make some carrot cake
-back and reallllly struggling with motivation now. I just want this scene/chapter to be over. I still need about 600 words today to be caught up ugggggggggh.
-I feel like I'm saying similar things over and over in the conversation I'm writing....
-If I wasn't listening to this album I would have 100% given up on writing this scene by now :p
-336 more words to write to be back on track. x_x I think this chapter is finally about to be over though.
-This album is so good though. Stars has been my jam for forever. Why did I take so long to listen to the whole album???
-I think I know what's going to happen in the next chapter now!
-New chapter = new motivation. AND I FINALLY MADE IT. (It's trash though. all trash :p) In the crawl I got sorted into my house and now I need to enjoy the feast!
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Tue Nov 06, 2018 1:50 am
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Day Five:

Album of the day: The Struggle by Tenth Avenue North
Rating:
Favorite song: Worn (another one of my all time favorites <3); Losing
Most Meredith song: Worn

Words today: 417
Total NaNo words: 4732
Total novel word count: 37509

Thoughts while writing:
-oh MAN I'm not in the mood to write right now. Yikes. I'm in a knitting mood. I'd rather be knitting. Maybe in addition to listening to an album after every 250 words I can watch a skating video and knit? Yeah. Going with that...
-muddling my way through one sentence and one paragraph at a time.
-okay I'm so unmotivated I need to stop here. I'll finish this album and listen to another tomorrow (day off because of election day! whoo!!)
-hahaha just noticed that I'm struggling as I listen to "the struggle" album
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Day Six:

Even though I had the day off, I had 0 motivation to open my computer and try to write something.

Now I need 1145 words daily to hit 65k by the end of the month.
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Day Seven:

Okay, finishing The Struggle by Tenth Avenue North! (I'm still going to try and listen to 30 albums...)
Rating: 9/10
Favorite song: Worn
Most Meredith song: Worn; Strangers Here

Album of the day: (technically for day 6) Come to the well by Casting Crowns (to be continued)
Rating:
Favorite song: Jesus, Friend of Sinners
Most Meredith song:

Words today: 1169
Total NaNo words: 5901
Total novel word count: 38677

Thoughts while writing:
-I'm struggling way less today! Maybe I needed that mini writing-break! :)
-Words are a-flowing today. It's not good writing. Super dialogue heavy and choppy today, but I honestly don't care. I just want to finish this dumpster fire draft :p
-I know so many songs on this Casting Crowns album, but I've never actually listened to the full album
-303 more words today and I still know what's happening in this scene so :) (getting sleepy though)
-Fading fast now. I'm so close to hitting my new goal! I'm going to power on and try to start writing earlier tomorrow :p
-Ooooh I'm getting close to 40k total!! That means I'm getting close to the final stretch! :D
-And made it!! I'm about to go down to Hagrid's hut to eat treacle fudge
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Day Eight:

Oops didn't write again.
Work was super demanding this week (as it has been for the last three months...) I worked like 12 hours yesterday and all I wanted to do after that was watch youtube videos and knit.

Hoping to play catch-up this weekend because it's going to be COLD and I don't do cold.
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Day Nine:

Finishing Come to the well by Casting Crowns (technically day 6 album)
Rating: 9.5/10 (I think the only reason it's not a 10 is that some of the songs are way overplayed on the radio and they don't do much for me anymore)
Favorite song: Jesus, Friend of Sinners; The well
Most Meredith song: The well; My own worst enemy

Album of the day: Chain breaker by Zach Williams (technically day 7 album)
Rating: Didn't think Unleashed would be topped but... 15/10 (so far. we'll see if this continues when I finish tomorrow ($10 it will :p)
Favorite song: Every single one? For real. But Survivor is my favorite of the favorites.
Most Meredith song: Survivor; To the table (strong contender for a 2nd place theme song, right behind Oceans by Hillsong United)
to be continued...

Words today: 881
Total NaNo words: 6782
Total novel word count: 39557 (sooo close to 40k! almost makes me want to keep writing....)


Thoughts while writing:
-I watched a sad episode of the OC (one of my all-time favorites) hoping that would get me in the mood to write my depressing book... I'm fighting the strong desire to knit and/or play sims
-Wow I managed to write 500 words without much effort!
-Ooooh I'm close to 40k total! I'm 98% sure I'll get there today.
-Moving on to Zach Williams. I have very high hopes for this album. One track in and I'm all in. LET'S GO ZACH WILLIAMS.
-hahaha I'm about to get very little writing done because I'm jamming right now. We haven't gotten to the songs I turn up loud on the radio :p
-man this album is gooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
-got distracted. hit a wall. brother is coordinating our Christmas gift for our parents. I'm going to finish this fab album tomorrow and get caught up!
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Day 10:

Haha didn't write again. I have no real excuse or reason other than I was lazy?
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Day 11:

Finishing Chain Breaker by Zach Williams (technically day 7 album)
Rating: As I said the other day, this album is fab. 15/10
Favorite song: Still every single one, but Survivor is my favorite of the favorites.
Most Meredith song: Survivor; To the table (strong contender for a 2nd place theme song, right behind Oceans by Hillsong United); Revival

Album of the day: There is a cloud by Elevation Worship (day 8 album)
Rating: 10/10 - gorgeous album!
Favorite song: Do it again <3; Yours
Most Meredith song: Do it again; Uncontainable Love; Here in the presence (whoooooa another contender for a theme song <3)

Words today: 2360 (a record for this NaNo season!)
Total NaNo words: 9142 (whoa so close to 10k for the month!)
Total novel word count: 41,917

Thoughts while writing:
-I've surpassed 40k!!! :D
-I'm thinking about Thanksgiving *drooling*
-ooooh this Elevation Worship album is already gorgeous <3
-one of my jams came on and I was due for a break so I took a dance break
-I'M ON A ROLL TONIGHT THOUGH. NO STOPPING NOW :D
-haha this is super talking heads-y oh well
-jamming again. This is a WORSHIP album.
-I FINISHED YEAR ONE OF THE HARRY POTTER WORD CRAWL. As soon as this song finishes, I'm going to take a quick break and come back to finish this album and get started on the next crawl. I'm on a ROLL today :D
-I'm actually enjoying writing tonight for the first time in months. Don't know why the sudden shift happened, but I'm going to enjoy it!
-wow acoustic Do It Again is gorgeous <333
-I'm getting sleepy. Two more songs then I'm done for the night! I feel so good about how much I accomplished tonight! :D

Words needed to hit 65k by the end of the month: 1215
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Day 12:

WOULD YOU LOOK AT THAT I'M ACTUALLY WRITING TWO DAYS IN A ROW.

Album of the day: Lifer by MercyMe (technically my day 9 album)
Rating: 7.5/10
Favorite song: Even If; Ghost
Most Meredith song: Even If; Hello Beautiful

Album of the day: Be One by Natalie Grant (technically my day 10 album)
Rating: 10/10
Favorite song: Clean
Most Meredith song: More than anything
(i'm streaming the deluxe version on spotify and i'm pausing before i get to the deluxe parts, which are live and/or acoustic versions of songs on the album. I'll finish tomorrow, but I'm going to stick with my rating and listed songs) :)

Words today: 1219
Total NaNo words: 10,361 (boom past 10k!)
Total novel word count: 43,135

Thoughts while writing:
-This scene is laaaaaaame so far. But I'm past 42k and quality doesn't matter at this point. I'm looking forward to being done so I can work on the second draft of novel6 :)
-now this scene is turning into some interesting symbolism. I truly had 0 idea where I was taking this and it somehow moved in a possibly useful direction!
-Done with Lifer, on to Be One! I still have 500 words to write today. I will succeed two days in a row!
-Fading fast, but I'm going to write 400 more words.
-I love Natalie Grant's voice.
-Uuuugh I'm so close to my word goal but now I'm on a new scene and what's this scene even going to be about?? I'm not sure how much more exposition I can do to start the scene off :p
-MADE IT. VICTORY IS MINE.
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Thu Nov 15, 2018 2:30 am
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Day 13:

I had a dinner after work and didn't get home until kind of late. Then I got another order for my side knitting business and wanted to knit with my remaining free time before bed so... :)
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