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Hello, everybody! With Halloween looming in the distance and so many great scares just begging to be unleashed, we have a proposition to help kickstart the holiday spirit. Don't worry, it should be simple...if you have a strong stomach, mwah hah hah!!!

*ahem* Anyway, there have been many iconic horror movies with a range of bone-chilling quotes; some are on the more poetic side of things, some are demented or playful, and some are just utterly grizzly. We thought to take some of those iconic quotes and spin them into a fun contest!

The rules are simple! Choose one (or many!) of the horror-themed quotes in the spoiler box as a prompt to write a flash fiction story. When you're done, please submit it to this thread here! There are just a few things to keep in mind as you go:

Flash Fiction should be short and sweet! Therefore, there will be a soft word count cap at 1,000 words.

You can submit multiple pieces if you'd like! But the participation points will only count toward one piece.

You'll need to pick at least one quote to base your story on, but you won't have to incorporate the full quote if you don't want to. If you also want to alter it to fit better, that's cool with us!

You can give your story a comedic, romantic, maybe even a whimsical edge if you choose. It could even be fanfiction! Whatever you do, just please be sure to incorporate a spooky element!

If your story features a particularly intense amount of blood, swearing, or anything more than PG-13, that's fine, but PLEASE BE SURE to put your story in a spoiler box and clarify what intense themes it'll contain first.

Submit your piece to earn a participant's badge and 100 points! Then, for the competition side of things, we'll review the works and give out some bonus points and badges to 3rd, 2nd, and 1st place!

In case you're wondering, judging will be done by me and the lovely Spearmint, and the primary criteria will be the story itself, spook factor, and how you represented/spun the quote(s) you chose.

The competition deadline will be October 19th. Badges and points will be awarded within the following days.

Have fun everybody, and good luck! :smt077


Quotes:

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13 quotes to use as prompts for a flash fiction story, starting with the most simple and open to interpretation, then progressing to the more intricate ones. The latter may present more of a challenge -if you dare...

1: "Game Over." - Saw

2: “She never sleeps.” - The Ring

3: “Into the Further you go.” - Insidious

4: “You're gonna need a bigger boat." - Jaws

5: “One, Two, Freddy’s coming for you…” - A Nightmare On Elm Street

6: “Death has come to your little town, Sheriff.” - Halloween

7: “Come join the clown. You'll float down here.” - IT

8: “She wanted to live with us by inhabiting the doll.” - Annabelle

9: “There was a Crooked Man, he walked a crooked mile.” - The Conjuring 2

10: “I do wish we could chat longer, but I’m having an old friend for dinner.” - Silence Of The Lambs

11: “In the darkness, they lurk. Be careful not to be caught by their soulless eyes.” - Five Nights At Freddy's

12: “A ghost is an emotion bent out of shape, condemned to repeat itself, time and time again until it rights the wrong that was done.” - Mama

13: “When someone dies in the grip of a powerful rage, a curse is born. The curse gathers in that place of death. Those who encounter it will be consumed by its fury.” - The Grudge
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Here's my submission! I'm calling it

Horror Movie Marathon

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Content Warnings! This story contains 18+ cursing, intense bullying, mentions of suicide, not very graphic violence, and death. Please proceed with caution.

Spoiler! :
Douglas let out a high-pitched girly scream as the killer smashed through the closet door. "Hell no! Nuh-uh!"

"You're such a sissy." Jonas laughed as he paused the movie. "You said you'd watch a horror movie with me this year!"

"You didn't say it would be so scary!"

"It's a horror movie, dude. What were you expecting? Sunshine and rainbows?"

Douglas threw a piece of popcorn at Jonas. "Shut up! You're such a dick."

Jonas threw a piece right back. "And yet you keep coming over to spend time with me. Maybe you're gay and you like dicks."

"Ew, Jonas!" Douglas gagged. "That's so gross."

"That's what someone who-" Jonas' phone buzzed in his pocket. He fished it out and turned it on. "Holy shit, dude."

Douglas leaned over Jonas' shoulder. "What?"

Jonas showed him the headline that flashed on screen.

Fourteen-year-old girl Emily Blanchett found dead by hanging in family home.

Douglas' jaw dropped. "Emily? That freak?"

"Ding dong the witch is dead." Jonas snorted and shoved his phone back into his pocket. "Do you think she did herself in?"

"It was hanging, dude. She did it herself." Douglas snickered behind his hand. "I'm just surprised the rope held her fat ass up long enough to kill her."

"Even gravity wanted her dead."

The two of them laughed, Douglas practically doubling over. They laughed until Jonas' face was cherry red and Douglas practically gasped for breath.

They sat in the dark of Jonas' bedroom for a few minutes, just listening to the grandfather clock in the hallway tick.

Jonas smirked and turned to Douglas. "Do you think she'll come back to haunt us?"

"Jonas!" He shoved a once again cackling Jonas away. "Don't say shit like that!"

"Oooh, Douglas. You hurt my feelings so I'm going to haunt you forever!"

The TV shut off, leaving the two teens completely in the dark. Douglas nervously laughed, drawing his knees to his chest. "Real funny. Perfect timing. Did you have this planned?"

"How would I plan the freak's suicide, idiot?" Jonas stood up, using Douglas' head to push himself to his feet. "I'll get the flashlight. Try not to piss yourself."

"Should we tell your parents? Maybe a fuse went out."

"Oh my god, you're such a wuss! It hasn't even been five minutes yet."

Douglas scooted back until his back was against the wall as Jonas blindly rummaged through his drawers. His stomach twisted like he was on a rollercoaster. Something didn't feel right. Something was wrong.

"I think we should get your parents."

"We're fine." Jonas snorted. "You don't have to hold my wrist so tightly."

"I'm not--"

A loud snap echoed through the room and Jonas yelped. Something heavy crashed to the floor. Douglas' breath sped up. "Jonas, this is not fucking funny. I'm going to kill you. Turn the lights back on."

Jonas groaned. "Doug...?"

"Turn the fucking lights on!"

A hand pressed against Douglas' mouth. It felt like ice trickling directly into his veins. "Shhhh." An icy finger dragged down his cheek, wringing a whimper from him. "You're going to wake up the whole neighborhood. You talk too much."

No that wasn't right. That didn't make sense. That was--

"Emily?" Jonas gasped sharply. "But... but you're dead."

"So I am. Funny how that happens." Emily squeezed Douglas' face tighter. "I didn't think much about it. I just... finally felt like doing it. You must've been proud to hear about it."

"Emily, please. It was just a joke. It was all a fucking joke. Don't--"

"Shut up!" Emily stomped her foot, the entire floor shaking with the weight of it. "I don't care what it was, Jonas, because after I died I got to do a lot of thinking. I sat there while my mother cried and screamed and I thought, 'Huh, I'm making a big fuss with the whole dying thing. I might as well make the most of it.' And you want to know what I came up with?"

Douglas tried to shake his head, but Emily just drove her nails into his cheek. He squeezed his eyes shut against the tears as burning overtook the slush of her hands.

"I decided that my mom shouldn't have to suffer alone. No. Misery loves company, right? Besides, I'll be damned if I go to Hell before you two." She tossed Douglass like he was a ragdoll. He crashed into the wall, pain shooting up his spine like fireworks.

Jonas let out a sob. "You can have Douglas! Kill him not me! It was all his idea. I was too scared to fight him! Kill him!"

Douglas lifted himself on his elbows. "Jonas...?" Was that all Douglas meant? He was just cannon fodder for Jonas' escape?

Emily cooed. "Don't worry. There's plenty of room for both of you."

Jonas' white sheet rose from the bed. Douglas grunted as he pushed himself fully up. He could get out. Jonas was willing to sacrifice Douglas. Two could play at that game. As the sheet approached Jonas' hunched figure, Douglas crept towards the door. He held his breath as Jonas started screaming.

"No! No! Don't kill me! Please! I'm sorry, Emily! I won't ever do it again."

"Of course you won't. You won't have a voice in Hell."

Douglas was almost to the door. All he had to do was open it and run. He could do this. He could--

The wood squeaked under his foot.

He froze, closing his eyes as the room went completely silent except for Jonas' ragged breaths. He clenched his fists and tried not to shake.

A gust of wind slammed him to the floor. His skull cracked against the wood. Blood smeared across the back of his neck. Lights flashed behind his eyes.

"Douglas!"

"You're not getting away either. Nice try, though." Emily peered down at him. She grinned manically, her form hazy and translucent.

Douglas let out a soft groan as his eyes fluttered shut. His head hurt and his body was heavy. He was unconscious before Emily picked up his body.

Breaking News: Teenage best friends Jonas Downs and Douglas Evans found dead in suicide pact gone wrong.
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Awesome work Wist!! :D
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Ghosts of Black Rock


It is possible that the number of words exceeds the limit by a little - I am very sorry, but I wrote the short story in my native language and at that time it met the maximum number of words with a margin, but during the translation the number of words changed more significantly than I wanted... I'm so sorry. :smt022
Anyway, it's possible there are some TWs: uh, generally I would say 14+ I guess? No graphic violence and swearing is in PG13, but there is some "scary" stuff. Also minor body horror (ghosts), mention of dead (not graphic description).

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She had been sheriff too long to be fazed by so much blood. But apparently too soon, because she couldn't bring herself to lift the corpse. She decided that a compromise was a compromise and kicked the pigeon away from the door with the toe of her boot. The headless body ended up in the bushes in front of the station. "Rest in peace, skunk," she muttered and looked at the stairs with a critical eye. The doormat will have to go, she thought. We will wash the stairs later.
She stared at the bloodied pigeon feathers for a moment before returning inside with a sigh. The light above her head flickered weakly, as if even the bulbs no longer wanted to fulfill their role. Posters from the local cinema stared out at her from the pale brown walls. Local, that is, the only one that didn't make Black Rock an absolute worldend, only the backcountry.
Her train of thought was interrupted by a familiar, long screeching sound. Almost as if someone were scratching the strings of a violin with their fingernails or opening the door of a mausoleum on the outskirts of town.
"There's a corpse in the bushes," Jeff announced, slamming his umbrella on the floor. He shook the door, which this time really sounded like a door and not a posthumous orchestra. "I hope you know about it, otherwise I would have to find someexplanation."
"Just wash the stairs tomorrow," she ordered and left him standing there in his soaked jacket and muddy shoes without another word. Hopefully they'll clean that up too. They may not visit the sheriff often, but there were enough rumors about her even without the dirt and mud in the waiting room.
She liked her office. It was big enough to hold practically all of her possessions. At least the one she cared about. Small enough that she could see the whole room and the door while sitting at the dark wood table. They didn't scream. At least not like a violin.
For the first few minutes she was floundering. On a day like this, she needed to keep her hands full and her mind full of problems, so that she could not even for a single second slip into the things she had forbidden herself to remember. But when she moved the calendar from three years ago on the wall for the third time and rummaged through every single drawer in the register, she ran out of ideas.
Rayley Weiss, the backwoods sheriff of Black Rock, was fighting a losing battle. She was a winner for eleven months and three weeks a year. She suffered a crushing defeat every All Saints Day. It wasn't her fault. It was her fault. The two statements contradicted each other, but both were true. Unless proven otherwise.
A knock on the glass door brought her out of the slow swirl of dark thoughts. Dull. Regular. A bit like heartbeats. A few seconds later they opened and Jeff entered the room, two mugs in his hands, puffs of steam rising to the ceiling from both. He changed his wet police windbreaker to a dry one. He slid into a chair across from the table and offered her a mug.
The tea was dark red and under the light of the table lamp it appeared much darker and thicker than it should have been. She could hardly see the bottom, and for a few seconds it resembled blood on the steps in front of the door. When she took a bite out of it, and it was hot. Perfect for a depressing early evening.
A few years ago, they might have started the debate right now. Well, they were no longer children. Not for a long time. Maybe too long, as evidenced by the gray in his stubbled hair and the fact that the years of frowning were starting to show on her face along with the dark circles under her eyes. She was not old, but she could no longer call herself a child.
Jeff cleared his throat. "So George brings with him the first deaths," he noted.
"What else would you expect from him? It's a cat."
Some police stations have dogs. They had a lazy cat in Black Rock. More precisely, a cat with fur of an unidentifiable dark color, a tail that looks like a broom and a penchant for sleeping on her desk.
"Um," Jeff got out and pulled out yesterday's newspaper from the stack of papers. Masks and pumpkins glared at her from the front page. Halloween scary ride! the caption screamed and Rayley went back to her tea, hoping the neon letters wouldn't burn into her irises. Late.
Memories were like tea leaves in her mug. Buried at the bottom unless someone picked up a spoon and stirred it.
Memories of Alice were a bit like that sediment, and the spoon was the whole damned universe and this whole damned town she never dared to leave.
Alice was also like the sediment. Well, she was not pulled from the bottom of the lake by spoons, but by people who found her body.
"You should go among the people today," Jeff suddenly announced. But before she could pierce him with an icy gaze, he continued: "Look. I know today is hard. For many of us, but especially for you. Well, you can't sit alone in the office all evening, drink every grain of coffee we have here and wait until you feel a little less like a ghost."
"Alone?" She actually wanted to protest, but some part of her brain got stuck on the word.
"Yes Rayley. Because I'm going to my cousin's - remember Sammy? He has a BBQ. You can go too.”
She didn't answer, just sipped her tea. She suddenly felt hotter.
Jeff silently got up and left. Maybe he said something to say goodbye, but she didn't notice it. She didn't even have time to say goodbye to her sister. Not really - after all, who would say goodbye to someone who is walking a few meters away from you? And it didn't turn out well.
And then she felt movement. Like a blast of icy air that sent shivers down her spine for miles. She knew it would be that voice before she even said a word.
"You let him go," said Alice, a flicker of remorse in her glassy gaze.
So she showed up after all. As always, she was wearing the clothes she drowned in - even water was still dripping from it, although it never hit the floor. As always, she stood there completely still. At the end of her desk, right next to the chair Jeff had gotten up from a moment ago.
Rayley swallowed hard. She didn't know what to say. She never knew.
During the past years, Alice left at this point. She gave her older sister a single disappointed look and evaporated, leaving the sheriff in complete silence, alone, and unable to think normally.
But Alice stayed. "You let him go," she whispered again, her lips barely moving. "Just like you let me go."
And then she casually added: "Well, I won't let you go."
She was never afraid of her. She never allowed herself to become afraid of Alice, or the ghost, or whoever she was. During the training, she was constantly told to keep calm, but at that moment she was filled with terror, the likes of which she had not experienced in years. She wasn't sure what was scaring her. But she knew that she would find out and that she didn't want to find out.
"I decided that you will stay here. In my little town.”
She no longer sounded like Alice. She already sounded like someone you want to run away from. "Well, that doesn't apply to everyone. Death has come to your little town, Sheriff. Let's see how many ghosts you'll never apologize to will haunt you after today."
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@AnotherCrowInRow Noted, and no worries about word count! It is a "soft" cap of 1,000 words, so as long as you're in that range, it's no biggie ^^

That aside, your story looks great! Good job!! :D
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@RavenAkuma Thanks!
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Omg I just saw this, but thank you, @RavenAkuma!!
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The dark green rug



Eeep! I went over the word limit! I think it turned out to be more of a mix of horror and thriller XD

TW: Mentions of blood, subtle descriptions of murder and emotional manipulation.

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I like my uncle. He’s funny. He wears dark brown pants with straps on his white shirts. Sometimes he brings me toys with blue and yellow colours, sometimes with a little bit of red. He always has a hat on, one with a dark green colour, like the smooth dark green rug placed in his trunk. He hasn’t ever parted from it since he bought it six years ago from a dusty thrift shop.

“It’s me favourite,” he says, “cause it has a good colour.” That is why he always makes sure to clean it thoroughly after all his frequent road trips. “With water and soap, everythin’ gets clean,” he says. Just like the dark red spots you barely see.

I have a good eye for things, he usually tells me, especially when I point out that he’s wearing the same shirt as yesterday or when he looks tired as though he could sleep and still not be awake when Mum brings me home from school. Or when he’s wearing two different socks, when he forgot his watch the other day, or when his nails have dark brown dirt under them.

“Burgundy,” he says then, “that's what it’s called. Like purplish red.” Purple and red, he explains, when I frown and my mind goes weird, like when I’m confused. “Burgundy comes from France", he says, “from good ol’ wine." He’ll bring me to France one day, he promised, so I can see for myself. “Cannot, will not, shall not trust them cheap half bottles of wine,” he repeats, so I remember and pronounce every word right.

“Pro-noun-ci-a-tion,” he says, “you have to learn that still in school. It’s what gets ya wine in the first place, but as long as ya have them brains and a good taste in things, ya gonna be fine.”

“Like me rug,” he says, “paid that crippled man half the price for it!” That’s true. I know. He called us after that, my mum and I, to tell us about how he couldn't find a carpet and ended up buying a rug, and to say he’d be coming over.
He usually calls to let us know, to check where Mum is and if I’m still at school. He brings chocolate if he’s late, which he said he would do, but he usually forgets. He rings the bell those days, to let us know that he is finally here.

Mum is not very fond of uncle, it seems. She loves him, she keeps on telling me, maybe more than she believes. "It’s my brother, I can't not love him."She says. "That’s a double negative,” I say then. “I learned that from uncle,” I tell her. She smiles and says nothing anymore.

Sometimes she says she’s full of it, him staying out late, not having a good job, wasting money, and bringing strangers into the house. “He can’t keep doing it!” It’s for work, he says then. “No,” she says, “it’s because you took after Dad!” Well, he mumbles, someone has to keep on doing it then.

They usually get into nasty fights with words, a verbal fight then. She screams, he yells, pushes over the small coffee table in the living room sometimes, and drives off. Where to, I never seem to find out. And I never seem to meet those strangers, maybe because Mum says he should keep them away from me. I’m still a kid. I suppose I am, but I can’t help it if I'm a bit curious though.

He didn’t call today, to say he would pay us a visit. Mum wasn’t home either. I was doing homework, I told myself I would say when she asked what I was doing when he came in. He didn’t ring the bell, either. When I heard his big car coming in the driveway, I ran to the window and stood on my tiptoes.

It was dark outside, no one was outside. It was raining heavily, white paint smeared the sky for a split second. Uncle wasn’t wearing a hat today, maybe he was nervous and forgot, I told myself. He forgets sometimes when he’s nervous. He’s here without Mum knowing, maybe that is why he is nervous today.

Mum doesn’t want him here when she’s not at home, especially not in the dark. I wonder if I should call her. The telephone is just there on the wooden counter. I look at it for a moment and debate whether I should do it. I don’t like making difficult decisions, it makes my tummy go round and round like roller coasters in a big bowl of soup with meat and broccoli and little pieces of greens.

Uncle steps out of the car and opens the trunk. He looks at the house for a moment. Red is smeared on his grim face, and I look away quickly before peeping again through the window. He doesn’t seem to notice me looking and waving as he unloads something heavy. Or at least, something heavy wrapped in his smooth dark rug.

He opens the door with much difficulty. “Hello, uncle,” I say, smiling. He suddenly drops the rug, and it falls with a thud on the floor.

“Kid,” he says. “Whatcha’ doin’ here?” he asks, as if he forgot it’s my home.

“Why, I live here,” I remind him.

“What are you doing here?” I ask. At that moment, we both look down to the rug. It smells like rotten fruit and it looks like it’s soaked in something deep and dark. There is something like fine threads falling out of it. And I suddenly think, he’s brought a stranger into the house.

But it looks like the brown hair of a doll, almost like the brown kind of colour from our neighbour’s hair. She’s a friendly lady, with lovely hair. She wears long skirts and gives me candy every time I go there.

He puts a finger to his lips. “It’s a big surprise. Don’t tell ya mum, ‘bout this.”

“Is it a doll?”

“Could be,” he says and tries to remove the red from his face.

He sees me looking at his smooth green rug. “It’s a good rug, don’t ya think? Covers everythin’ up.”

It does cover up something, I think. I don’t answer and ask, pointing to his face, “What’s that?”

“But just blood, nothin’ grave.”

He picks up the big present with the brown hair and walks towards the basement. “Stay here.”
I do as I am told and wait on the sofa. I don’t mind waiting in the dark, but I feel a little uncomfortable. My hand begins to tremble, and so too my little pinky. I guess we’re both nervous.

I hear loud footsteps and lots of thudding in the basement, but I sit tight. When he comes back, the red is almost gone from his face and he has his rug folded in his hand. A little bit of red falls down on the ground. Mum wouldn’t be happy with a filthy floor, but I say nothing.

“Wish we could talk a bit, but I’m havin’ an ol’ friend for dinner,” he says. It sounds like an excuse, like a thing you say to not do a thing. But I say nothing, he must have a good reason. He leaves the house, gets in his car, and forgets to wave goodbye.

I love my uncle, even though he might act a bit strange at times. He wears a hat, though he forgot today, and he brings me toys.

I walk back to the sofa. I wonder if I’ll see the friendly lady again tomorrow.
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Great work Roxanne! :D
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omg, this was such a fun challenge! I hope that you enjoy (and get shiver from) my slightly unorthodox submission. This is a heavily modified excerpt from one of the stories I'm working on with the same name as this.

Where the shadows hide


CW: 18+ some languages, a singular F-bomb, and themes of horror in general.

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A girl that lived in a small city in Kobe,
Had her life changed course for the worse that day.
Whatever it was that she saw,
All she could do was stay silent in awe.




The world, covered in darkness,
Was quiet; nothing but crickets.
I too, remained silent,
Falling asleep, that was my intent.
Insomnia, however, is an awful guest.
She comes and haunts, keeping me without rest.

There were nights like these, I suppose.
Types of nights, over alert, staring at that vase with a single rose.
Struggling to close my eyes, I counted sheep.
After a hundred, surely I’ll be asleep.
One, two, three, four, five, six…
Bored, my mind started to cross the Styx.

An alarm rang, yelling at me to get up for school.
I reluctantly woke up, wiping off from the pillow my drool.
Ate breakfast, brushed my teeth,
Got ready, but before going out, took a piss.
The walk to school was mundane like any other.
But hey, that’s what sleep-deprived hallucinations are for.

Walking crooked on this crooked street, my eyelids were heavy.
Before I knew it I already, arrived at school; how dreary.
On my way all the way here,
I kept seeing eyes on shadows that leer.
First period being math, was the last thing I needed today.
Trying to decipher the gibberish on the board, I gave up seeing no way.

That was when it started, a drop of red on my textbook.
Feeling something leaking from my nose, I was afraid to look.
Wiping with my arm, my suspicions were right.
Nosebleed, in the middle of class, sleep-deprived from last night.
I raised my hand and was excused,
Rushing to the bathroom, my shirt was red-infused.

After cleaning myself, I entered a stall, still having a red shirt on.
Wondering what to do, the light was suddenly gone.
In the pitch black, I yelped in horror and surprise.
When the lights came back on, I for sure thought I met my demise.
But all that happened, was nothing at all,
And outside the door, was a clean shirt in the hall.

Changing into it, ‘how strange,’ I thought it to be.
Now I’m puzzled as to who brought it to me.
Nevertheless, the rest of school,
Wrapped up, with no more mishaps from fools.
On my way home, I saw,
Those eyes again, in shadows through dawn.

At night, as I was doing my homework,
I kept sensing something, seeming to lurk.
Every time I turned around though, there was nothing.
But when I turned back, my answer had changed into something.
Instead of ‘1564’, that I wrote for the math homework with my pencil,
The answer for #13 was ‘37,564’ with red ink, handwriting like stencil.

I fucking jumped out of my chair, the lights suddenly flickering.
Screw this god damn rhyme, I can’t keep it up when I’ve exepereienced something so so terrifying.
As I looked back on my paper again, the red ink still remained.
I fully expected ‘redrum’ or some cliche shit next, but instead, the power cut out. Then, I saw… it. I made eye contact with it. And it noticed me.

The lights fully cut out, and in the darkness, it lurked. Staring deeply into me with those pair of soulless eyes. I wanted to move, but my body froze in place. My room was pitch black, and the shadow… it was alive. It was getting closer.
No matter how much I tried to yell, my vocal cords were tied up, not being able to produce even a peep of desperation.
Step.
Step.
Step.

With each step the shadow took, my heart beat faster. It began to open its mouth, and I realized: this shadow was more than just an absence of light cast by an object; it was a physical creature that was interacting with this world. Once it was close enough to touch me, it grinned, its mouth getting bigger and wider.
I braced myself… for something… but when I opened my eyes, there was… nothing. The light came back on again.
I was spared, for some reason. Muscles that I didn’t even know tensed up all gave in at once, making me collapse onto the ground and cry in dismay.



After that incident, she was conscious of every corner that darkness lived. Every crevice, every shadow, every alleyway, they were all possible points of danger to her.

Another day you live.
But always be aware:
In the darkness, they lurk.
Be careful not to be caught by their soulless eyes.
If not, your life might come to an early demise.
When in doubt, you’re doing it wrong. Take a step back. It’s okay to mess up because life gives you chances. ToastK




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The village of Eldridge had always been known for its winding roads and crooked houses, but it wasn’t until the arrival of the new family that the sinister whispers of the Crooked Man began to circulate again. The Thompsons moved into the old Whitaker house, a rickety structure that leaned precariously to one side, its windows cracked like shattered memories and its paint peeling in grotesque strips, resembling old skin left to rot. The townsfolk eyed them with a mixture of suspicion and dread, murmuring tales of a dark curse that had haunted the area for generations.

“Did you see how they look at the woods?” Mrs. Granger, the town librarian, whispered to her neighbor one autumn afternoon, her voice trembling. “Like they’re waiting for something… or someone.”

A chill wrapped around the village as the sun dipped low, its dying light barely piercing the thickening gloom. The trees behind the Thompsons’ house twisted and gnarled, their branches reaching out like skeletal fingers, casting long, haunting shadows that seemed to writhe and dance in the encroaching darkness. The children dared each other to wander too close, convinced that the Crooked Man—an entity from nightmares and bedtime stories—would emerge from the shadows to claim their souls.

One stormy evening, twelve-year-old Lucy Thompson stood at the edge of the woods, her heart pounding with equal parts fear and an irresistible curiosity. It felt as if the darkness beckoned her, whispering her name with an allure she couldn’t resist. “Just a peek,” she murmured, stepping onto the twisting path that led deeper into the trees, unaware of the eyes that watched her from the shadows.

As she ventured further, the air grew thick with fog, swirling around her ankles like icy fingers of dread. The trees leaned closer, their branches curling like claws ready to ensnare. It was then that she heard it—a voice, soft and melodic, weaving through the mist like a serpent. “One, two, Freddy’s coming for you…”

“Who’s there?” Lucy called out, her voice trembling, but she felt an inexplicable pull to follow the sound, her feet moving before her mind could protest. The voice swelled, more insistent, twisting through the fog like a playful spirit turned malevolent.

“Three, four, better lock your door…”

Suddenly, she stumbled into a clearing, encircled by trees that stood sentinel, their gnarled forms casting grotesque shapes upon the ground. In the center lay a crooked doll, its porcelain face cracked and splintered, one eye missing, the other staring blankly into the void. “She wanted to live with us by inhabiting the doll,” the voice echoed, now a chilling whisper that crawled under her skin.

As she knelt to pick it up, her fingers brushed against the doll’s cold, lifeless surface, and an icy shiver shot down her spine. The world around her warped; the trees twisted and contorted, their branches intertwining like the fingers of the damned, while the air filled with the sound of laughter—childish yet laced with malice.

“Join us, Lucy,” the voice sang, morphing into a cacophony of giggles that reverberated in her mind. “You’ll float down here!”

Panic surged through her veins as she dropped the doll, stumbling backward. The ground quaked beneath her, the trees leaning in closer, trapping her in a suffocating embrace. “No! Let me go!” she screamed, her voice swallowed by the thickening fog, the laughter growing into a chorus of mocking delight.

The truth crashed down on her like a wave—this was the curse of Eldridge, the Crooked Man, a spirit of rage and sorrow, thriving on the unwary, ready to ensnare those who dared to tread too close to his domain. Her heart raced as she turned to flee, but the crooked path twisted and coiled in on itself, leading her deeper into the eldritch shadows.

“Death has come to your little town, Sheriff,” the voice taunted, echoing through the trees, and Lucy knew she must escape before she too became part of the cursed tapestry woven into Eldridge’s dark history. With every ounce of desperation, she tore through the fog, running blindly, her breath coming in ragged gasps.

Just when she thought she would be lost forever, she burst through the trees and stumbled onto the familiar road leading back to her home. The Thompsons’ house loomed ahead, a crooked silhouette against the oppressive night sky. Bursting through the door, she slammed it shut, her heart pounding in her chest like a frantic drum.

The village remained eerily still, but the laughter lingered, echoing softly in the distance, a haunting lullaby. As Lucy leaned against the door, trembling, she noticed a small, crooked doll lying on the floor, its one eye staring up at her with an unsettling, knowing grin.

“Game over,” it seemed to whisper, as shadows danced around her, waiting patiently for the next unwitting soul to wander down the crooked path, their laughter a promise of what was to come.
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

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Woo, I'm glad you enjoyed the challenge, Toast! It looks great! :D

And great job to you too, Esmeraya! :D
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"Death has come to your little town, Sheriff."

It wasn’t the kind of sentence you expected to hear on a Tuesday morning, but there it was, hanging in the air like the fog rolling in from the hills. Sheriff Holbrook stared at the messenger: a man dressed in worn flannel and boots caked in dried mud. His voice was calm, but the words clawed their way into the Sheriff's gut, twisting.

"You been drinking, Wilson?" The Sheriff leaned back in his chair, trying to let the humor in his voice take root. But Wilson didn’t crack a smile.

"Nah, Sheriff. You’ll wanna see for yourself."

The quiet town of Hollow Ridge didn’t get much excitement. Holbrook figured most of his work involved breaking up petty disputes over land or telling the Johnson boys to stop tipping over cows for fun. Death, real death, hadn’t knocked at their door in a long while. At least, not in the way Wilson meant it.

But something in the way Wilson stood there, rooted to the spot, forced Holbrook to stand, grabbing his hat and badge in one motion.

The streets were empty as they made their way toward the outskirts of town. The silence that greeted them was thick, unnatural, even for this early hour. People should have been tending to gardens or dragging their kids to school, but the windows of the little wooden houses were all closed. Like the town itself had turned its back.

"Where is it?"

Wilson nodded to the old oak tree near the creek. Holbrook had spent half his childhood running through those woods, fishing for nothing, and climbing up into that massive oak with his friends, thinking it was the highest place in the world. He had a memory of carving his initials into the trunk, along with a heart, for a girl he never had the guts to kiss.

But none of those memories mattered anymore. What mattered was the pile of bones--no, not bones. Holbrook had seen bones. These were twisted remains, like something had chewed them up and spit them back out. Flesh hung from the mangled skeleton, and the smell hit him like a punch in the jaw. He resisted the urge to gag.

"Jesus Christ, Wilson, what did this?"

Wilson was shaking his head, his lips pressed into a thin line. "Can't be natural. That’s all I know."

Holbrook knelt down, not daring to touch what was left of the poor soul. Something dark and slick was smeared across the grass, the dirt, even the tree. It looked like blood, but thicker. He stood up, wiping his hands on his pants even though they hadn’t touched anything.

"This isn’t an animal attack. No bear could do this. No wolves in these parts anymore either."

"Nope." Wilson stepped back, looking around as if he expected to see something lurking in the woods. "It’s somethin’ else, Sheriff. Somethin’ old. My grandfather used to talk about creatures that lived out here, before the townsfolk drove 'em away. Said they fed on men’s bones. The elders always said they’d come back one day, when the land was hungry again."

"Wilson, that’s just folklore. Stories to keep kids from wanderin’ too far."

Wilson’s eyes bore into his. "I am not a kid anymore, Sheriff."

Holbrook wanted to argue, wanted to tell him this was some vagrant’s doing, a wild dog gone rabid, anything to make this situation make sense. But deep down, he knew. Hollow Ridge had its own secrets. His grandmother used to tell him about the shadows that stalked the woods at night, how the moon would dim when they passed. He hadn’t believed her then. But now, staring at the carnage, the world felt a little smaller, a little darker.

"What do we do?" Wilson asked, voice barely above a whisper. Holbrook reached for his gun, though he wasn’t sure what good it would do against something like this. "We warn the town. Get everyone inside."

"And then what?"

"We wait."

"For what?"

The Sheriff looked to the tree, that old oak that had stood long before any of them were born and would probably outlast them all.

"For whatever's coming next."

The wind picked up, rattling the leaves, and for a moment, Holbrook thought he heard something; a distant whisper, an echo of something he couldn't place. Death had come to their little town, but it wasn’t done yet.
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Great job, candyhearts! :D
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Thanks to everybody who participated! Your submissions were absolutely stunning! Judging will commence as of today, and badges/points will be rewarded once the results are up! :D
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