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Whispering from the chasms of the Earth



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Fri Oct 22, 2021 2:05 pm
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Whispering from the chasms of the earth
The voices are crying in terrible dearth
Dearth of peace, scarcity of a bit of sleep
They, then whisperers want to come from the deep
To teach us how to be forever awake,
To teach us how to put our lives at stake.
  





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Sat Oct 23, 2021 5:11 pm
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The fall is inviting you

Spoiler! :
I never say this but this can actually sound a bit nonsense...

I listen to the trees whispering to each other
They have made a promise not to let the sunlight enter.
I walk along the forest path, humming a song
Suddenly it changed. I observe the change.

The umber leaves are dying down
Depriving the tree of its majestical crown.
I see the moon aglow high up in the sky
The stars shining and bidding the summer a 'good bye!'

I close my eyes and immerse myself in the auspicious flora
The leaves rustle and I feel the beautiful aura
The universe has come down to the wood
For doing all the impossible yet possible good.
  





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Thu Oct 28, 2021 1:03 pm
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Liminality says...



That's a lovely nature poem, @ForeverYoung299! The different personifications make it very lively, and I thought it has a nice rhythm as well.
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Sun Oct 31, 2021 2:13 pm
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Spoiler! :
Wow, I totally forgot about this. This is what happens when you have exams...Anyway I gave a good lecture to a person who was telling me to open my ask. Unintentionally, I rhymed a few lines of my lecture. I just decided to write a poem highlighting my lecture. Ignore the reasonless italics.


You don't want to become a mass murderer, right?

You don't want to
Be a mass murderer, right?
Or...do you want to
Haunt people's peaceful nights?

Do you want to make the everglowing lights
Of Life flicker?
Do you want to give people
Down their spine a shimmer?

Your own people, I mean
Do you want to steal their majestic grin?
You don't, you can't want that
I know, I know. Now, coming to the conclusion of my rant,

Please put on a mask.
Help the humanity do its task.
It will be late to be late
You will do nothing but stare at corona's increasing rate.
  








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