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burying my heart in a pumpkin



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Tue Oct 19, 2021 11:09 pm
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Plume says...



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hollowed-out, glowing:
dig into that velvet flesh
and find it beating
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Fri Oct 22, 2021 3:21 am
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Spearmint says...



woahh i love the image, Plume!! :O (did you draw it?) And that haiku is so spooky too~ Looking forward to reading your NaPoWeek poems! C:
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Fri Oct 22, 2021 12:35 pm
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Thank you so much, Spearmint!! And yes, I did draw parts of it! The heart I did not draw (I'm not quite that talented). <3
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Sat Oct 23, 2021 2:22 pm
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I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Sat Oct 23, 2021 4:03 pm
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Liminality says...



Love those images, Plume! "key-lime-in-the-summer green" was particularly vivid for me. I remember being like o.o when I first saw a picture of key lime pie, so that line reminded me of that. I also love all the repetition and the long images strung together with dashes - it makes it very recitable.
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Sat Oct 23, 2021 5:47 pm
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Plume says...



Thanks, Lim :) That's exactly what I was going for! ^-^
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Sun Oct 24, 2021 8:19 pm
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I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Tue Oct 26, 2021 12:25 am
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