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Event 3: Somonka (Tanka Pairs)

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Tue Aug 03, 2021 11:17 pm
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kattee says...

Spoiler! :

the ocean is the redflag-next-shore

shuttled to your shore
I shoved parts of Me between
your shell-blades, Others
were drowned by My Own waves -- you’re
lovely as always.
don’t flatter me as
your whining damped my pixie
dust, too murky to
carry on my shell blades -- i’ll
drown if you don’t leave so please.

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Have a lovely day❤️

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Tue Aug 03, 2021 11:28 pm
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looseleaf says...

I guess I'll participate in something (this is really bad, I'm sorry).

Spoiler! :
fuzzy brown furball
brought sunshine into my life
always by my side
turning sad tears into smiles
truly a woman's best friend

tall loving woman
beautiful and radiant
gives me love and joy
she will care until the end
truly a dog’s bestest friend

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Tue Aug 03, 2021 11:52 pm
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niteowl says...

Spoiler! :
At karaoke,
I thought I saw him, as if
He loved me enough to
Stay, as if he could know that
I was singing this for him.

She sang the song, sweet,
That hurts me when it plays-but
I’m the one who hurt
Us, leaving like a fool. Now
She sings, but never for me.
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci


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