july 13
FriendsBreakupShort
IS FINITO, WOOOO. Nearly finito. I'm having one (1) more friend take a pass at line edits because they make some really good line edit suggestions - obviously I'm not taking all their suggestions, but I wanted to have them look because I do like many of their suggestions.
Anyway, I looked at everyone else's suggested edits today and cut about 300 words, tightened things up, smoothed things out, and now I'm making final final edits as my friend's comments roll in. I also have a title, thanks to the same friend: UNFRIENDED, which particularly works now that there's a line in there about Mads blocking Casey on Snapchat </3
I looked up manuscript formatting for short stories and formatted accordingly, and I did look up cover letters BUT Wizards in Space uses Submittable and does not actually have anywhere to put a cover letter, so I guess I get off easy lol.
Anyway, submitting this tomorrow <333
MerfolkShort
Nothing today BUT IN MY DEFENSE LOOK AT ALL I DID FOR FRIENDSBREAKUP.
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