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Two Crows Watch from the Gallows Tree (part 17)



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Sat Nov 05, 2022 11:51 pm
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"When the sun sleeps is when Strithr will rise. You must alert this Realm and the others before it sinks."
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Sat Nov 05, 2022 11:53 pm
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That was alarming. She looked at them in distress. “What? No. How am I supposed to do that? I don’t even know what I’m supposed to say. Or where I’m supposed to go. Or how I’m supposed to get there. And I don’t have powers yet. Or like… soldiers or guards or anything. I can’t just… they’ll think I’m crazy.”

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
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"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sat Nov 05, 2022 11:59 pm
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"I will be accompanying you. Those who try to hinder your progress will be dealt with."

(In addition to the benefits she will also have flashes of past battlefields in certain locations--with all senses--as well as sharing emotions, especially grief, anger, and fear.)
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:01 am
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(Ooh nice good to know!)

Jerica rubbed her face, overwhelmed. “…how soon?” Her voice was weaker than she would have wanted.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:02 am
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"As soon as possible."

(We can delay her departure as long as you want; I know you wanted her to be Ky's replacement as main)
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:05 am
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(Okay cool ^^ we can see how it plays out. Ky’s not pissing me off as much now as she was before lol but Jerica is gonna be resistant to go with the bombshell she just learned about her family).

“…I need time,” Jerica said after a long moment. “I can’t just go rushing off. I have responsibilities… things I need to do first.”

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:06 am
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(That's very fair!)

"Do not delay," Them said grimly. "Not if it can't be avoided. But you may call on me now, when you need me. For now, do so only when you are ready to depart."
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:09 am
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“How?” Jerica asked.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:14 am
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"Repeat after me: 'Tunga of Strithr, þjóna eyra mínu.'"
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:16 am
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“Tunga of Strithr… poja earmi nu?” She repeated uncertainly.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:21 am
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(The weird p makes a th sound)

"þjóna eyra mínu."
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:24 am
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(Ahh good to know lol she was gonna mispronounce it either way but I clearly didn’t know, either haha is it a real language?)

Jerica clumsily tried again, getting a bit closer this time. “…what does that mean?”

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:27 am
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(Yeah it's Icelandic. I did a sloppy Google translate cuz I don't speak the language)

"Tongue of Strithr, serve my ear."

(That sounds reeeally sus now that I've written it in english)
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:29 am
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(Hahahaha omg)
(And you just said it to high schooler, whose brain is 100% in the gutter)

She recoiled a bit, wrinkling her nose in distaste. “Ew.”

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sun Nov 06, 2022 12:32 am
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(Yeee)

Them tilted their head. "You dislike the phrase?"
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I’d heard he had started a fistfight in one of the seedier local taverns because someone had insisted on saying the word “utilize” instead of “use".
— Patrick Rothfuss, A Wise Man's Fear