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The Hand That Mocked Them



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Wed Jun 22, 2022 4:32 am
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"You can take him," Laurean scoffed. "For a price. I'm not letting a construct as complex as a homunculus go for free."
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 4:35 am
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"How is your life for payment?"
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 4:36 am
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"You wouldn't dare." He wrinkled his nose. "Murder is punishable by death in this region."
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 4:41 am
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Kivvien bit back a laugh. "Very well." He spat a spell targeting the old man's heart. Should it land, his heart would fail.
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 1:31 pm
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He muttered a swift, simple deflector spell and the attack ricocheted.

(Do try not to kill him though)
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 2:16 pm
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(Kiv is high-key murderous rn, but he doesn't use these kinds of spells ever so if one lands it could just hurt Laurean without fully killing him)
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 2:17 pm
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(Gotcha)
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 2:28 pm
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(forgot to write the actual post i had written in my head alskjdflaskjdlfsa)

Kivvien fired off a series of spells, every one he could remember, one after the other and then again from the top of the list.
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(Oop)

Laurean did his best to deflect them but a couple hit him hard and he let out a shuddering groan, eyes rolling back in his head.
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 2:40 pm
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As soon as the old man stopped moving, Kivvien put away his wand, immediately moving to search the room for his missing journal, and Hieronymus, who had to be somewhere nearby.
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Hieronymus had stopped writing, eyes darting toward the door. He stayed still though, crouched under the bed.
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 3:03 pm
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Kivvien crouched down and checked under the bed after giving most of the room a once-over. And there he was. "Hieronymus..." he didn't know what to say.
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 3:04 pm
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Hieronymus was trembling, tears in his eyes. "I'm sorry, sir," he said shakily. "I'm sorry, he told me to and I had to do what he says, is he dead? Did you kill him? Oh my gods..."
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Wed Jun 22, 2022 3:08 pm
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"Come here, we have to leave," Kivvien said as soothingly as he could muster.
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