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Holiday Senryu Contest 2021



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Holiday Senryu Contest



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Introduction

Holidays are made by people. As such, you will find lots of material about human beings to write about this holiday season. Senryu are poems with the same syllable structure as the haiku, 5-7-5. The difference is, where haiku tend to be about nature, senryu are those 5-7-5 poems that focus on human nature: what people do, what we're like, and our "follies". They are also comic poems - poems that tend to make you laugh or crack a smile.

Your challenge for this contest is to write a sequence of three senryu about the holidays.

You can read some examples of senryu here and here. The three senryu may be related to each other, or not at all.

Rules
1. Please keep content family friendly! Ideally, it should be something like a joke you'd be comfortable telling your friends on this site.
2. Please submit by the due date~
3. Enspoiler your submission and post it in this thread.

Prizes

1st - 100 points

2nd - 75 points

3rd - 50 points

Special Prize Categories

As a tie-in with the YWS Best and Most awards, this contest will also award the following prize categories besides 1st, 2nd and 3rd:

Most Colourful (Or Colorful) - 25 points + mystery avvie edit

Best Snowperson Chic - 25 points + mystery avvie edit

Best *firework crackle* Vibes - 25 points + mystery avvie edit

The names of these categories . . . are up to interpretation. Be creative! For example, you don't necessarily have to write a senryu about snowpeople for it to have snowperson chic. A senryu that fits the vibes of the phrase 'snowperson chic' might very well make the category!

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31st December 2021
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Tue Dec 07, 2021 4:56 am
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alliyah says...



Might edit if that's allowed - But here's what I've got!

Spoiler! :

~ice~

ice; a glass half full,
half empty - optimism?
pessimism melting?

water crystalized
beautiful except for
scraping car windows

waddle across ice
trying not to slip, wait! WHOOOOOOOOSH
well at least I tried...
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Editing is fine before the last day to submit has passed! @alliyah
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Plume says...



Here's my entry! Hope it's sufficiently holiday enough!

Spoiler! :
the powdered sugar
atop birthday lemon bars
puffs up as I blow.

multicolored lights
twinkle, like small candle flames
for two holidays.

sugar clouds the air,
my friend's face white with sweetness.
I laugh, then I cough.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Tue Dec 14, 2021 6:47 am
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rida says...



Christmas Senryus delivery!
Spoiler! :

I.
Excuse me if I
Want video games this Christmas,
- can't blame the new age

II.
Smaller sibling must
Irritate elder siblings
- always means Christmas too

III.
Christmas is coming
Danger for parents; oh, look!
Costly Christmas lists
  





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Thu Dec 23, 2021 12:19 am
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yosh says...



yoshi is here . . . i almost forgot abt it 0-0 . . . but I DIDN'T SO IT'S OKAY RIGHT

Spoiler! :

the smiles never last
but the heart is always glad
to see a smile, once

our eyes admire lights
strung across the sky tonight
yet, we never fly

clad in red and white
he flies above the rooftops
with the brightest smile



(smile and smiles are only one syllable here btw. re-reading this, i'm pretty sure smile is two syllables, so is it okay if it's just one?)
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Hijinks says...



May edit if I have time!

Spoiler! :
dips her fingers in
icing, as she decorates
the sugar cookies -

if she cared, she'd say
this is much too sweet. but it's
different with sprinkles.

(blazing colour like
flame-shaped memories that no
one forgets all year.)
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Sat Jan 01, 2022 10:13 am
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Liminality says...



Okie dokie, the contest is officially closed! No more edits may be made. Thank you all so much for participating - I will announce the results shortly!
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