Pieces that have already received the 3 promised reviews, but are still eligible to be reviewed if Knights want to become eligible for the Main Challenge Badge:
For future service completions I will update on this post. After all, a Knight must be a good steward of their respective environment. In loyal service,
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With courage Squire Malachi approaches the Knights of the green room. He receives his squire duties and plunges into them with vigor. within hours he has completed the first of his quests. In the following days he complete the next eight.
finally, after at last he completes his tenth and final mission, he begins the journey back, only to be confused of the way back. He trusts his horse Caballo de Fuego, to lead him through the dark forest of confusion.
At last he trees thin and he emerges upon a plain of green grass. In the distance he sights a tall green tower, surrounded by smaller buildings of the same colors. He urges his horse forward, and weary and battle-scarred, but victorious, he gives Knight Hannah his list of completed tasks, with a bow.
Review #1 The Pack - Chapter Two
Review #2 The Death Of Zeus
Review #3 Can You Grasp It In Your Hand?
Review #4 I see the patience of Chinars in winter...
Review #5 I Wanted to Say
Review #6 Fictional Letters: Anomie's first letter to Tioni
Review #7 Break My Heart
Review #8 White Noise - Prologue
Review #9 A small scenery on earth.
Review #10 A Night to Remember - Chapter 4
Malachi takes off his silver helmet. He awaits Hannah's response somewhat nervously. His horse nudges him on the shoulder. Malachi gets the message.
Chill, your about to become a knight. Good thing you've got such an awesome horse or you wouldn't be here.
1. Rain (Rain.) 2. P.S I love you (P.S. I love you) 3. Unexpected (Unexpected) 4. Of flesh and blood (of flesh and blood -) 5. Barber shop pleasantries (Barber Shop Pleasantries) 6. Just In Case You Thought This World Was A Fair One (Just In Case You Thought This World Was A Fair One) 7. Is it a Dream? Chapter 2 (Is It a Dream? Chapter 2 More Confusion) 8. The Feeling of Meh (The Feeling of Meh) 9. This is a Test (This is a Test) 10. Rebuilding Thunder (Rebuilding Thunder: Chapter 1) 11. Forget me not (Forget Me Not) 12. Is it a Dream? Chapter 4 (Is It a Dream? Chapter 4 Meeting the king) 13. When I need you, even just a second. (When I need you, even just a second.) 14. Review Day! (Review Day!) 15. Fire (Fire) 16. Friends (Friends) 17. Midsummer night's cool touch (Midsummer night's cool touch) 18. Winter's End (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104402#c393826) 19. Black Tears (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104366#c393466) 20. It's funny how sickness seeps into the body. (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104367#c393345) 21. Two Sparrows (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104359#c392965) 22. How Long (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104337#c392292) 23. Amelia Earhart (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104317#c392288) 24. The Mob Boss (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104281#c391627) 25. of flesh and blood (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104410#c393927) 26. Barber Shop Pleasantries (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104405) 27. Just in case you thought this world was a fair one. (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104407) 28. Sunsets (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104192) 29. The Seven Crows (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=102264)
She puts away the journal carefully, staring at the empty pages. "Looks like quite a bit of work I have left before me.'' She whispered softly, then closed her eyes.
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"There are worse crimes than burning books. One of them is not reading them." - Ray Bradbury
Pieces that have already received the 3 promised reviews, but are still eligible to be reviewed if Knights want to become eligible for the Main Challenge Badge:
It's a rough terrain out there, what with Knight Dragon flying about on foot and slaying every beast that dares to even hint at crossing his path, but even in the presence of such vicious, honest, and loyal violence, two Squires take up their honorable posts and complete the duties that were set before them. Ten reviews in the spirit of the Green Room, to protect the citizens of the town from danger and disappointment -- that's what they completed and what they offer now on bended knee in a castle undergoing repairs. Knight @Sapi takes a break with Knight @beckiw to stop hanging tapestries and witness the ceremony. Knight Omniyus (@Aquestioning) sits on a newly carpentered chair in an upper balcony and has a fine view of the dust coating the battle-worn Squires' hair.
"For your service, we grant you title and a place at the table," announces Knight Hannah to the hushed and crowded hall.
I begin my job as a Knight. I slack for the first few days, but after a good meal mount my trusty steed, and set out to battle for a sword, lance, and ultimately . . . a Unicorn.
This time the great hall is quieter and emptier. Many Knights have rushed off to aid in the High Volume Alert emergency the town has declared -- they're being overrun by beasts, and it is the Knights' responsibility to keep them safe. So while few Knights are able to attend the ceremony, those that do are no less proud. Knight @Rydia stands by the doorway with mud still caking her face, ready to run back out into the fray as soon as the moment is over. Knights @Aley and Barefoot (@barefootrunner) sit side by side at the side of the room with Knight @skorlir, deftly sewing up torn and battered shirt sleeves; the weather outside is growing slowly colder.
In this quiet, intent Great Hall is where Knight Ariana (@ajruby12) bends on one knee to receive her title and swears the oath to fight forever with honor, loyalty, and knowledge in the name of the Knights of the Green Room.
Knight Ariana
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Pieces that have already received the 3 promised reviews, but are still eligible to be reviewed if Knights want to become eligible for the Main Challenge Badge:
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Lady Ariana's heart leaps within her as she is given the title Knight! But she humbly bows her head and makes a ritual oath to serve and protect the good people of the kingdom. Then, she grasps her sword and strides out from the hall, her next quest in mind already. Ah, but to be the Silver Knight.. It was an honor great enough to cheer a king, yet harrowing enough to frighten the bravest of hearts.
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