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Thu Jun 06, 2013 2:40 pm
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Hannah says...



Thank-you Hannah. (Nice to see you back in business.)


You're the kindest!
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Thu Jun 06, 2013 5:47 pm
Jonathan says...



I await my land nominations. (In the main time I need to workout.) :smt102 (And I love the badge for the first challenge.) :smt118
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Fri Jun 07, 2013 9:13 pm
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Jonathan says...



Guys I have A new Novel going pleas read it and review while it is in the green room.

Next chapter: Fantasy Land: A Griffins Trail.

Next chapter: Fantasy land: Our Journey Begins.

Next chapter: Fantasy Land: The Land of the Dwarfs.
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Sat Jun 08, 2013 2:30 am
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Hey, Jordin!
You can use the [edit] button at the bottom of your posts to add new information to a post you just made!

Also, I reviewed your post. I hope it was helpful to you. :) I'm going for my first land badge now. haha
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Sun Jun 09, 2013 2:06 pm
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Racket here would like to request on being a knight of the green room. Do I just post here? I made two reviews in the green room that are first and second reviews, do I have to make 8 more?
"The one who reigns forever,
He is a friend of mine!
The God of angel armies,
Is always by my side!"
"I was cup-bearer to the king." -Nehemiah 1
"I've lost all my marbles, but I promise they'll come back."
  





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Sun Jun 09, 2013 4:00 pm
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Hey, Racket. Your avatar looks like you're all ready. Yes, please make ten reviews in the green room from the time that you've declared your squireship! That means, to be a great and honorable knight, start counting your ten NEW reviews right now! You can post them here, listed 1. - 10., and use the same post (through editing) to keep track of all of your green room reviews!

Any other questions?! We're glad to have you~
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Mon Jun 10, 2013 2:27 am
Jonathan says...



I still need my land badge Hannah.

Congrats at becoming a mod by the way!
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:42 am
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Haha, I was a mod before and just hopped back on the team.

Jordin, it would also be super helpful if you could post the names of the badges you earn and (like the most helpful thing on the planet) a link to the post where you're keeping track of all your work! 8D

P.S. The five consecutive parts earns you a village, not a hamlet~

Also, man. I'm sorry I missed the first chapter of your novel. By the time I got there, it already had seven reviews. o_o





Then, just a general announcement to everyone everywhere~ I know we are eager to earn our badges, but please make sure that the reviews we give out are quality. Every review you send represents this small community of knights. Each review should have constructive suggestions on what the writer could improve! If you only have praise, that's okay, but that would be better delivered as a comment, not a review. Just sayin'~

Review on, and our next mission will be out soon. (:
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:35 pm
Jonathan says...



Okay but I need to say something seeing as you are a mod, there 5 that need to be deleted because they are all exactly the same.
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:39 pm
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What do you mean? :)

You said "they" are all the same, but I don't know what "they" you are referring to. D:
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:44 pm
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Sorry there are four copy's of one review. :I
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:51 pm
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Where? In your list? Towards the general count? Then go ahead and just edit them out and we'll be fine. c:
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:57 pm
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What do you mean Hannah?

Fantasy Land: A Griffins Trail.

In this one.

What do you mean by edit them out?
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 4:03 pm
Jonathan says...



One more thing what does this mean?

Hannah wrote:Special consideration will be given for novels/short stories reviewed in entirety except for the first chapter: this will count as sufficient valor for a town or kingdom.
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 4:09 pm
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Ahh, looks like a prose mode already took care of it. I'm just on the poetry crew, so I can't edit threads in general fiction. If you happen to see a multiple review-post spree like that on a piece of poetry, I'd be happy to help!

I didn't know if you were talking about your list or what, so the link was very helpful!

Also, what I mean is that when a member posts a new novel, the first chapter is easy for anyone to review. They can pop in and pop back out, so first chapters usually have lots of reviews and get reviewed pretty quickly. From the second chapter to the end of a novel/short story, there are many less reviews, because some people didn't read the first chapter and then don't feel like they can review the second.

What this means is that if a Green Room Knight can't review and ENTIRE novel because the first chapter's already been attacked, but all the other chapters are still needing reviews, the badge can still be awarded to the knight if they do all the chapters, 'cause first chapters are busy but we still have to help out with the rest.

Did that make sense? :)
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