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The Ravens-An Order of Knights
The Beginning Tale of the Crusades

Three and a half long centuries ago, a lone knight set off across the great expanses of YWS, on a quest to gather a group of soldiers to fight for the cause. The kingdom of Nate the Conqueror, had fallen into the great depths of the plague as works with no reviews grew like ivy on the wall. The disease was spreading and polluting the water when finally Knight Hannah (soon to become captain), created a specialized group of soldiers to fight the evil shrubbery. 9 of her fellow fighters joined up immediately and they were soon slaying every vine they came across. Slowly but surely more squires seeking a higher place pledged their allegiance. More and more sub-orders and groups were added but then came the great downfall.

Captain Hannah found it was time for her to retire from the service of the knights. She had spent these years training lieutenants to replace her spot and felt it was time to leave. And so she set off on a new quest involving some ladies of the lake. Instead living long and prospering, the orders of knights fell into the plagues again. The king disappeared shortly, no longer having a mighty squadron of knights, and the few active members tried to keep it alive.

A century later, several young knights (and one rather ancient one who didn’t think 2 centuries was that old), set off across the lands once again to find the holy grail, a new group of knights and possibly find their captain. As they crossed the great kingdom of YWS, the knights reviewed every work they came across. There was one knight among them that went by the name of Lady Lovelace. She found herself in the place of wanting more challenges. On a new quest, she set off with her loyal raven Tim and mighty horse Arthur, to create the order you see standing before you today.

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Order Roster

1. Knight Lovelace (@LadyLizzLovelace)
2. Knight Kayla (@Kays)
3. Knight Africa (@BlueAfrica)
4. Knight @Dino
5. Knight Ink (@PrincessInk)
6. Knight Feather (@FalconryGirl9086)
7. Knight Biscuits (@BiscuitsLeGuin)
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1. Commander Lovelace (@LadyLizzLovelace)

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The Log of Knight Kayla


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May 2017
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1. Conics Unfortunately: 11
2. The Fire Underneath of Things - 11
3. Hidden Entity - 4 - The Goddess and Her Prophets
4. Born to lose
5. Luneset 1.1
6. The Red-Headed League
7. I barely got out in time
8. See that Girl
9. There's So Much More To Juno Moon:
chapter 3

10. Quick Write
11. Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 10
12. Essay Please Help
13. Ghosts
14. Chapter 3:Lanelle
15. Liz+Zac (8.0)
16. Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 9 pt. 1
17. Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 9 pt. 2
18. [url=[url=https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/occymay/My-Taken-Right-Duologue-edited-135383?c=617773#c617773]My Taken Right (Duologue)- edited[/url]
19. There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 4
20. Viggo's Break - Chapter 2.2 - Taking a running start (seven years before)
21. Viggo's Break - Chapter 1.2 - I think the Earth moved (Viggo's POV - suite)
22. Equivalent Worlds - Chapter Eleven
23. A Lost Hope (SUYS month) 1.167k
24. Queen of the Lake- Chapter 1 *NEW* Rewritten
25. Viggo's Break - Chapter 3.1 (Step into my parlor)
26. Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 3.4
27. How Was Your Day? - Chapter 7.2
28. An Unrealistic Illogical Ideologist: The Other Side
29. The Fire Underneath of Things - 12
30. Viggo's Break - Chapter 3.2 - Step into my parlor (Warning, Russ's POV)
31. Out With the Old...
32. Viggo's Break - Chapter 4.1 - Feverish
33. There's So Much More to Juno Moon:
chapter 5

34. Viggo's Break - Chapter 4.2 - Feverish (seven years ago-now)
35. The Disciples of Crajin
36. The Hunters Arena
37. Viggo's Break - Chapter 5 - Manhunt
38. There's So Much More to Juno Moon: chapter 6
39. Viggo's Break - Chapter 6.1 - I never knew you lied, Nyssa Malik
40. Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 10
41. Teen Spirit
42. Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 11
43. Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 3.5
44. Still prisoners? Chapter 3 of My messed up life
45. Guadalupe the Mosquito
46. Alyssa Stewart and the Mystery of the Scarlet Orb: Chapter One: Doorway to Dreams
47. Liz + Zac (9.1)
48. There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 7
49. 3/4 Realm of the Dragons
50. Gardens of Eden Chapter 2 Part 3
51. The Progeny: Chapter 51
52. Conics Unfortunately: 13
53. How Was Your Day? - Chapter 8
54. Oh Becky: an application of philosophy to teenage problems
55. The Fire Underneath of Things - 13
56. Viggo's Break - Chapter 6.2 - I never knew you lied, Nyssa Malik
57. Viggo's Break - Chapter 7.1 - Pizza, sex, and tit for tat
58. Chapter 2 - Catherine
59. Viggo's Break - Chapter 7.2 - Pizza, sex, and tit for tat
60. There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 8
61. Liz + Zac (9.2)
62. Viggo's Break - Chapter 8.1 - Comparing mouths and playing dolls
63. Viggo's Break - Chapter 8.2 - Comparing mouths and playing with dolls (seven years ago)
64. Viggo's Break - Chapter 9.1 - The accomplice
65. Viggo's Break - Chapter 9.2 - The accomplice
66. Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 11
67. Gardens of Eden Chapter 2 Part 4
68. Viggo's Break - Chapter 10.1 -
Like a dog with a bone

69. Viggo's Break - Chapter 10.2 - Like a dog with a bone
70. Hidden Entity - 5.1 - Rulers
71. The Yellow Hen Cafe
72. Viggo's Break - Chapter 11.1 - #RememberNyssa
73. Viggo's Break - Chapter 11.2 - #RememberNyssa
74. Baguettes and Beggars
75. Frost Lark News 5/14/17
76. Old Habit Part 2
77. Dreaded Dinner Part Chapter 12
78. Journey to oasis "the fate of the world lies in the hands of a little s***"
79. From State to State 1.1
80. surviving a 12+ hour plane ride
81. Viggo's Break - Chapter 12.2 - Dead as the Sea
82. Viggo's Break - Chapter 12.1 - Dead as the Sea
83. Wasn't It Just a Dream? (Part 1)
84. Que Sera Sera Chapter 5
85. Conics Unfortunately: 14
86. BlackLagomorph Prologue
87. Big Things
88. Liz + Zac (10.2)
89. Liz + Zac (10.1)
90. Viggo's Break - Chapter 13 -
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The Log of Knight Dino


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The Log of Knight Ink


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6.Elderwood Chapter 1: Part 1
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11. Lost
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13. work/MJTucker/Chapter-1-Romantic-Collab-135225?c=618562#c618562
14. work/Aritra/Alyssa-Stewart-and-the-Mystery-of-the-Scarlet-Orb-Chapter--OneDoorway-to-Dreams-135515?c=618690#c618690
15. work/Tomcat202/The-felling-of-betrayal-135513?c=618691#c618691
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17. work/ShadeMaster/Mental-Battle-Field-135539?c=618743#c618743
18. work/Aritra/Alyssa-Stewart-and-the-Mystery-of-the-Scarlet-Orb-Chapter-Two-Bruise-in-Ones-Mind-135545?c=618764#c618764
19. work/Aritra/Alyssa-Stewart-and-the-Mystery-of-the-Scarlet-Orb-Chapter-Three-VorshevkythequotKnowitallquot-135555?c=618810#c618810
20. work/NightKaizer/Blazewing-135556?c=618836#c618836
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23. The Fire Underneath of Things - 13
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9. work/Hattable/The-Boundless-Serendipity-of-Juno-Plating--Chapter-11-135995?c=620943#c620943
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33. work/RavenBlack/Gardens-of-Eden-V2-Chapter-Six--Part-2-136282?c=622792#c622792
34. The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 10


July 2017

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August 2017

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June 2017
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Sorry I nerfed May, my internet was down and reviewing was all but impossible.
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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The Log of Knight Biscuits


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September (complete)
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October


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I just realized I hadn't posted this before, so sorry xD

Due to lifing, I find that I don't really have enough time to be reviewing much. Unfortunately, as a result, I will be leaving this fine order.
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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Haven't bothered keeping up on mine since May ended, but I think it's safe to say I've had at least 20 Green Room reviews each month since then, considering nearly all I do is Green Room reviews and I've exceeded 20 reviews each month.
  





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I've forgotten to get the badges up but hopefully I'll get everything sent out and written up this weekend.

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@BlueAfrica Same. I'm probably going to take 20 from each month and just copy and paste them into here for ease. I'm pretty sure I've done at least 20 as well. :p

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My raven (Rhona) went on holiday to the Bahamas last month. I'm hoping she'll be able to imitate a pigeon's homing instincts at some point soon.

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream


Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.

Linkin Park
One More Light


  





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Yasssss I made it this month! Literally stared at the GR waiting for a work to pop up for most of today xD

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream


Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.

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