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With Review Day winding to a close, let's try to keep the momentum going and clear the Green Room out this month!

Our fellow YWSers have done an amazing job getting rid of nearly all the old Green Room Works this June Review Day, so let's honor that by showing them our Knight's Courage and keep the trend going! Let's make an obtainable goal that we can use to push ourselves forward as we head into the long month without our friendly neighborhood Review Day Teams.

I propose that we, as the Knights of the Green Room, clear out all May works before the next review day.

When Review Day ends, I will compose a list like I did for review day and post it here, so that we can easily and quickly identify opportunities like getting a Village Badge and, if everyone who wants to participate signs up for a work to review, then we can avoid repeats on work.

Let's take care of business!
We can do this!

Right now there are only 14 11 9 works from May in the Green Room, so if all of them have no reviews, which is not the case, that is only 28 22 18 reviews! (I better post this before it changes again)

If all 11 9 are done by the time Review Day is over, let's do June. We can talk about how much of June we think is obtainable.

Sign up will begin after Review Day ends, and all you have to do is sign up for a single review. Just one, but if you're feeling ambitious, sign up for more!

The list I'm going to make is going to include how many reviews it needs at the time the list is made, so please, if there are two slots, two people need to sign up to get it out of the Green Room. Just say the name of the thing you want to review to sign up!

Let's work together to keep the Green Room Clean!
  





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News and Quests


June: 16-30 The Beast Quakes

Our new list is short! We can get this done if we focus our efforts and all participate. Let's slay June before July sneaks up on us. Make them work for their reviews on Review Day. Catch up and Cash out!

After you've reviewed something and popped it clean of the Green Room, announce your success and I'll reward you.

The List

The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 30
The Wanderers: Chapter 3 - Framed (Part 1)
The Wanderers: Chapter 3 - Framed (Part 2)
The New Generation--Chapter 17: Hide and Seek
A Rift Between Magi: Chapter 3
Agents of the Cardinal - 9 - Of horses, cows, bitches and rats.
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.1
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.2
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.3
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.4
Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.5 (Finale)
I didn't know- NaNoWriMo project 2015 - Chapter 6
I didn't know- NaNoWriMo project 2015 - Chapter 7
Chapter 15: Change
The Legend Keepers: PhoenixSight Chapter 2
Ding Dong Part 2
The Legend Keepers: PhoenixSight Chapter 2
How the Marigold Lost It's Sun: Ch 4
Eaten or Beaten
Untitled Document NOVEMBER (A rant about my dad as a story)
The Dive-Chapters 7-8

June: 1-15 The Prequel of June

Spoiler! :
Welcome Knights to the quests you can choose to participate on in June. For those of you unfamiliar with what's going on, refer up a post. Otherwise, here is the bounty list. Sign up with the name of what you want to review! Some quests may only take one person, while others make take two.

Our Prequel is going to take 31 reviews to thwart 26 works total.

1] Angels Pt. 4: The Last Installment. - DONE
1. Knight Carlito
2] Chapter 3 - Friend of Royalty | The Performer: A Danganronpa Fanfiction - DONE
1. Knight Aley
2.
3] Black Contamination_ chapter 1: our silent farewell - DONE
4] Black Contamination_ chapter 2: A new start - DONE
1. Knight Aley
2.
5] War of Dawn - Chapter 16 - DONE
6] Hell is Other People (novel, part 2 chapter I) - DONE
1. Knight Aley
2. Kight BlueAfrica
7] Hell is Other People (novel, Part 2 chapters II-III) - DONE
1. Knight BlueAfrica
8] Divine Intervention: Chapter Five - DONE
9] Starlight: Chapter 5 (Part II) - DONE
10] A Dungeon Boss's Journal: Day 31-35 - DONE
1. Knight Reikann
11] Heart of Darkness - Two - DONE
12] Heart of Darkness - Three - DONE
13] The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 24 -24 - DONE
14] Anyone Can Kill - DONE
15] Project Flux {Book one of the Flux Files}-Chapter 2 - DONE
1. Knight Pompadour

16] The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 25 -25
1.

17] Project Flux {Book one of the Flux Files}-Chapter 3
1. Knight Pompadour

18] The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 26 -26
1.

19] When a Bird Sings chapter 1 pt. 1
1. Knight Ripple - DONE
20] Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 2 - DONE

21] In the Absence of Stars - 2.5
1.

22] The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 28 -28
1.

23] Everlasting Life- Chapter Five - DONE
1. Knight Carlito
24] Alcingeria Volume One -DONE
1. Knight Hannah
25] Elodie Bones & The Stonewall Hounds: Chapter II - DONE


May:
Spoiler! :
So here's the list of works in May that needs reviews:

Fortunee
1. BlueAfrica <3DONE!

Yup. that's it. XD This is a long work, so don't take it lightly. It has several chapters and a whopping 24,000 words [I rounded].

That being said, I'm going to make a second list, and this will be of June 1-15th. I think we should be able to clear that.

Whomever wants to sign up for Fortunee, go ahead and claim it.
  





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Right, so I did not see this until after I did that. Anyway, I did what I often do in cases of extra-long works like that and reviewed one section (in this case the intro, which I had quite enough to say about in the first place), while a) telling the author that I was doing that and b) suggesting s/he break it up into pieces and repost to get feedback from more people.

At any rate, Fortunee is out of the Green Room.
  





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FINISH JUNE BY JUNE FINISH JUNE BY JUNE
you can message me with anything: questions, review requests, rants
are you a green room knight yet?
have you read this week's Squills?
  





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I'll sign up for Alcingeria unless someone gets to it before I do.
you can message me with anything: questions, review requests, rants
are you a green room knight yet?
have you read this week's Squills?
  





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I'll sign up for When a Bird Sings.
"Eternity, I hear you calling, but you will not have me yet."
  





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Knight @RippleGylf is best knight! :D
you can message me with anything: questions, review requests, rants
are you a green room knight yet?
have you read this week's Squills?
  





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Thank you! :D
"Eternity, I hear you calling, but you will not have me yet."
  





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Carlito says...



I'll take Angels Pt. 4 and Everlasting Life Ch. 5!
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.

Ask a Therapist!
I want to beta read your novel!


Ask me anything. Talk to me about anything. Seriously. My PM box is always open <3
  





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I'll get to the Flux Files~
How to format poetry on YWS

this sky where we live is no place to lose your wings
  





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reikann says...



I've already done the rest of the Dungeon Boss series, so I'll take that.
Honorary second village and all!
  





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I'm going to lay claim to anything that still needs two reviews that way only one other person has to come along for those. That is

Chapter 3 - Friend or Royalty - i did this.
Black Containment - Chapter 2
Hell is Other People, both of them.
Elodie Bones

If I get done with that I'll probably grab the other Black Containment if it's still up... since it's chapter one.
  





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I'll join you in reviewing both parts of Hell Is Other People. I was interested in them on first glance, but they were longer than the amount of time I had for Review Day purposes.
  





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