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Knight r4's Adventure



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1 Fern Chapter 5 - No name decided
2 Fern Chapter 6 - Training With Sisters
3 The eternal quest
4 Lost Magic. Chapter 12.
5 My Cornucopian Gift: Sonar
6 Thunder and Ice
7 Hannibal: A Hero
8 Silence is Silver, Chapter 11.
9 The Trail of Bloody Footprints
10 Heavenly Heart~Chapter One
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Knight r4 kindly requests the use of a sword to aid him in slaying the beasts of the Green Room. I name it Flame!

11 Forbidden Shadows Chapter Twelve
12 DREAM Chapter 1: Odd Stone
13 Core Cities Chapter Two Part One
14 Core Cities Chapter Two Part Two
15 The Battle. Prolouge
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I have battled hard but I have come out of the battle. In exchange for my efforts I request that I be rewarded with a shield. I shall name it Deran

16 The Missing Ones(Full, First Draft)
17 A Torn Kingdom: Chapter Three
18 Amber's World: Chapter Five
19 Sex and Romance Can Die
20 Flying High
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After a long absence I returned to the Green Room and fought furiously. At last when I departed the beasts of the Green Room learned to fear me better. Here are the reviews I have done to obtain my helm which I name Wolfert

21 Purple Punches Chapter 1 - Purple Business
22 Across Worlds - Chapter 14 Part 1
23 The Rebels of Aeltar - Chapter 6
24 Across Worlds - Chapter 14 Part 2
25 An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of V)
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Long have I battled to obtain a steed. Now at last I have achieved my goal. One dark night, when the moon could not be seen, save for a little sliver I wandered into the Green Room and was confronted by these ten beasts! But at last when the morning dawned I heard a whinny and my noble, Chestnut colored steed, named Swawyer, came to me joyously. I pray that we shall never be parted!

26 The Secret Service page #3
27 Redwing - Chapter 3
28 Sorceress: Chapter 8
29 Corps of Recovery: Part 13
30 Rifted - Chapter IV - Sting Of Valor
31 A Race For Life Sequel
32 I remember that one time...
33 A Porcelain Lullaby [Chapter One]
34 Scared of My Shadow
35 Knight In Shining Armor - Chapter 2
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I have battled fiercely to keep the monsters of the Green Room under control. But now I have a horse I am in need of a suit of full armor to defend myself. I name it Battered. Here are the fell beasts which I have slain to obtain Battered. May it always protect me as I battle onward!

36 The Rebels of Aeltar - Chapter 7
37 Searching for Security 3.2
38 Searching for Security 4.2
39 Silence is Silver, Chapter 15.
40 Before Never Land
41 The Pirate Queen: Chapter 14
42 Warped Sonnetium
43 Machiavelli's "The Art Of War" - an essay on it.
44 Our Epitaph
45 Revolution - Chapter 4
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Fri Jul 11, 2014 10:30 pm
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I have visited the Green Room many a time before, but this time I was well nigh overwhelmed by the great number of beasts in the Green Room, including many trolls and dragons. It was all I could do to keep my horse under control, much lest battle these great bests. It was only my suit of armor that saved me from many great perils. But at last I came through the battle. However I am in need of a lance with which to thrust through any beast who dares to approach me. Here are the works I have battled with and slain! I name my lance, Henry of the powerful thrust!

46 Machiavelli's "The Art Of War" - an essay on it, part 2.
47 Aestive
48 Searching for Security 4.3
49 The Wayfaring-Chapter 3: Hailton (Revised)
50 The Wayfaring-Chapter 2: A Dark Knight Arisen (revised)
51 Drowning, Not Waving, Not Smiling
52 Frog
53 The Truth About Forever
54 ​Mångata
55 Sam (The Boy With The Pretty Brown Eyes)
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Mon Aug 18, 2014 7:41 pm
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For many days I have battled in the Green Room. I now bear many scars of battle. The enemies in the Green Room only grow stronger. But now I am equipped with weapons a horse and a suit of armor. These have enabled me to speedily slay a total of one hundred beasts. After accomplishing such a great fete I have decided that I am in need of a coat of arms that all who face me may know who I am. Here are all those who I have recently slain!

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I walked through the forest of the realm of the Green Room. Here and there I battled against many a foe. I slew many, yet many more came upon me as if they were waves in a whelming tide threatening to sweep me away. But at last I emerges from the forest with many a battle scar. I collapsed onto the sand of the beach by the Green Sea and collapse. The forest is conquered, but the sea faces me. I have a very long voyage ahead of me.

As I sat musing a scroll was washed up on the shore. It was encased in a glass bottled in it I read that I had received a coat of arms. I walked over to a building and found there I shield hanging up on the wall on it I found the coat of arms I always have longed to have.

When I was done I walked out of the building and I saw a ship rounding the point of a peninsula with my coat of arms sewn into it's mast. It has arrived to carry me off to May distant lands! The journey on land is done, but they voyage is just about to begin!


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94 Across Worlds - Chapter 18 Part 1
95 Across Worlds - Chapter 18 Part 2
96 Across Worlds - Chapter 19
97 Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 22
98 Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 23
99 Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 24
100 The Rebels of Aeltar - Chapter 8
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