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Ashes



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Fri Jan 20, 2012 1:16 am
Mikko says...



V1

I
I have a way
to make you pay
for everyday
you caused me pain.


V2

I
I promise you
for all you do
you'll loose
me so choose.


Bridge

This little heart of mine
hasn't shown a smile
in quite a long while
you've locked me up, locked me up.
But now, I shine,
because now I'm fine
and I know I shouldn't mind
but your time is up, time is up.


Chorus

Burning, burning,
the ashes of your love
land on my tongue
cold like the winter's flakes,
cold down my past mistakes.
Crumbling, crumbling,
your world in my eyes,
bringing you down;
crashing under your own weight,
crashing under your own fate.


V3

I
I can't sit and wait
for things to come my way -
gotta get them today -
let me go, I pray.


V4

I
I've had enough
of your prisoner love
you play so rough
so, baby, I'm off.


Bridge

This little heart of mine
hasn't shown a smile
in quite a long while
you've locked me up, locked me up.
But now, I shine,
because now I'm fine
and I know I shouldn't mind
but your time is up, time is up.


Chorus x2

Burning, burning,
the ashes of your love
land on my tongue
cold like the winter's flakes,
cold down my past mistakes.
Crumbling, crumbling,
your world in my eyes,
bringing you down;
crashing under your own weight,
crashing under your own fate.


Bridge

This little heart of mine
hasn't shown a smile
in quite a long while
you've locked me up, locked me up.
But now, I shine,
because now I'm fine
and I know I shouldn't mind
but your time is up, time is up.


End
I
I have a way
to make you pay
for everyday
you cause me pain...

Spoiler! :
I actually sang this and recorded it with the tune I thought best fit the song, but I suck at music so don't even expect anything xD
when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams
  





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Fri Jan 20, 2012 7:51 pm
LadySpark says...



<33333
YOU RECORDED. :O
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  








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