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Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:25 pm
NaRachel says...



CAN YOU NOT DO AGE RESTRICTIONS ANYMORE OR AM I BEING IGNORANT? FOR ANYONE WHO WANTS TO BE WARNED THIS SONG CONTAINS THE F WORD :)


And my heart is hurting for you
While your heart is hurting for her
We're both looking back behind us at what could have been
And who we were
And this isn't how life's supposed to be
But life isn't meant to be fair
So our two hearts ache in unison
And suffer as much as we can bear

O-oh she seems so different from me
yea-ah
And I'm not gonna change who I am so I guess there's no hope for me
Its obvious to anyone who looks
Your feelings for her never left
Please try to move on
Cuz i know the pain thats in your chest


And my heart is hurting for you
While your heart is hurting for her
We're both looking back behind us at what could have been
And who we were
And this isn't how life's supposed to be
But life isn't meant to be fair
So our two hearts ache in unison
And suffer as much as we can bear

We could stay up late
Talking bout the cru-elty of fate
But you burned and I burned that opportunity down
And I really miss your face
No matter where I look you can't be replaced
But you get it better than me, you fucking still see her around

And you don't
No you don't get it
You won't
No you won't get what it's like to not be able to fight for what you care about
And you don't
No you don't ever seem to get it
You won't
No you won't get what it's like to be so isolated all alone you left me

And my heart is hurting for you
While your heart is hurting for her
We're both looking back behind us at what could have been
And who we were
And this isn't how life's supposed to be
But life isn't meant to be fair
So our two hearts ache in unison
And suffer as much as we can bear
And pretty soon we're gonna be lost
And we could use each other
We could talk just like it was
One friend to another
But you still refuse
And I can't really blame you
But next time you miss her
Remember thats what your doing to me too

And you don't
No you don't get it
You won't
No you won't get what it's like to not be able to fight for what you care about
And you don't
No you don't ever seem to get it
You won't
No you won't get what it's like to be so isolated all alone you left me-e-e-e
You left me

And the sad part is
You get it
How it feels
You get what its like to want something so bad you orientate your life around it
And I see
You get it
How it feels
You get what's it like to long for someone who's just never gonna get it
"You grow, you grow like tornado
You grow from the inside
Destroy everything through
Destroy from the inside
Erupt like volcano
You flow from the inside
You kill everything through
You kill from the inside"
  





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Sat Jan 28, 2012 3:30 am
AlfredSymon says...



HI Rachel! Yeah, I saw your warning, and I saw your F word. Lemme give a Kudos Revue for this one!

Great lyrics! I detect the pattern here in the song. A sense of love and hate and pity mixes with the great word choice, making the overall concept clear and relative. I know I have been touched by it ;) !

Great work presenting it. Just be careful on how you divide your verses ;)

Kudos: :smt023 :smt023 :smt023 :smt023

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