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The Darkest Love



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Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:13 am
LanaBrown says...



I'm just a lonley girl
Stuck inside of a messed up world
No place to call my own, no place to call my home
But I know deep inside
That life's going to have its bumpy rides
Just got to to get on now
I'll come back safe and sound
Get on now
Take a breath
Say a prayer
Forget the rest

I'm in a hidden world
The darkest love for the darkest girl
Why can't I be light?
Oh please God for just one night
I don't know who I am
I'm trying my best to understand
What this life has in store for me
And who I'm meant to be

I'm just a battered soul
Trying my best to reach my goals
I know I can do it
If I belive I'll pass right through it
And I hope deep inside
That soon I'll see life's smooth, bright side
Just gotta get up now
I know I will be found
Here I am
Now I know
What to do
Can't let it go

I'm in a hidden world
The darkest love for the darkest girl
Why can't I be light?
Oh God please for just one night
I don't know who I am
I'm trying my best to understand
What this life has in store for me
And who I'm meant to be

Someone help me
Someone save me
From this crazy world I'm not used to
Someone hear me
Someone free me
You can see me but I can't see you

I'm in a hidden world
The darkest love for the darkest girl
Why can't I be light?
Oh God please for just one night
I don't know who I am
I'm trying my best to understand
What this life has in store for me
And who I'm meant to be

Someone help me
Someone save me
From this crazy world I'm not used to
Someone hear me
Someone save me
You can see me But I can't see you

No I can't
I can't see you
No I can't
I can't see you
No I can't
I can't see you
No I can't
I can't see you

I'm in this hidden world
Last edited by LanaBrown on Wed Jan 18, 2012 9:08 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We're all in the same game, just on different levels; Dealing with the same hell, only different devils.
  





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Wed Jan 18, 2012 4:11 am
dasiamari says...



Hai!! I really liked your song!! One correction from me!

Just got to to get on know


And again here

Get on know



I think you mean now not know. If you do mean know....then it doesn't really fit.
Know that she's back in the atmosphere I'm afraid that she'll think of me as a plain old Jain told a story 'bout a man who was to afraid to fly so he never did land. ~Train
  








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