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Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:27 am
LiesOnLies says...



Spoiler! :
This song turned out completely different than what I expected. But for some strange reason the voice of Count Dracula from Sesame Street came into my mind. If you don't know Sesame Street or Count Dracula I'm sure you can look him up on youtube or something to get the voice down. Everything in italics is what Count Dracula is saying..lol. Oh and at the end of the song it is supposed to be "Strangler." In case you thought it's supposed to be "stranger" you'll understand what I mean once you get to the end


Choking the cat with my noose of pain
Stratches from flailing paws increases my own vitality
Gasping before the neck cracks pertains
to the growing trivial pain and my new ability
to kill
kill

One cat dead
Two cats dead
Three cats dead
ah - ah - ah - ah


Are you ready to die
Are you ready to die
The killer part just fits me
A stranger I've become
Are you ready to die
Are you ready to die
The killing scenes just please me
A stranger I've become

...The stranger I've become

One cat dead
Two cats dead
Three cats dead
ah - ah - ah - ah


Squeezing my way through the noisey crowd
My heart beats fast as I come closer to the chosen life force
It feels amazing, I am so proud
As my knife's an inch closer, I soon trip and fall off my course
The thrill
thrill

One chance missed
Now two missed
Then three missed
ah - ah - ah - ah


Are you ready to die
Are you ready to die
The killer part just fits me
A stranger I've become
Are you ready to die
Are you ready to die
The killing scenes just please me
A Stranger I've become

...The stranger I've become
...I've become

One chance missed
Now two missed
Then three missed
ah - ah - ah - ah


ah - ah - ah - ah
ah - ah - ah - ah


(Get ready to die)
(Get ready to die)

ah - ah - ah - ah
ah - ah - ah - ah


I'm coming closer
I now know where it lives
I'm coming closer
I now know where it breathes
I'm coming closer
I now know where you are
I'm coming closer
I now know where you breathe

Here kitty, kitty
kitty, kitty, kitty, kitty
Here kitty, kitty
kitty, kitty, kitty, kitty
My god, you're so big
My god, you're so big

ah - ah - ah - ah
ah - ah - ah - ah


One cat
Two cats
Three cats
ah - ah - ah - ah


Never killed a cat that screamed like this
But it's more so exhilarating for it fights back so well
It's neck I grasp but it throws its fists
It gives me a thrill and I ejaculated as it fell
Oh no
no

One heartbreak
Two heartbreaks
Three heartbreaks
ah - ah - ah - ah


Are you ready to die
Are you ready to die
The killer part just fits me
A stranger I've become
Are you ready to die
Are you ready to die
The killing scenes just please me
A stranger I've become

...The stranger I've become
...Stranger I've become
...I've become

It seemed so quick
It can't be this quick
No, no, no

One heartbreak
Two heartbreaks
Three heartbreaks
ah - ah - ah - ah


Are you ready to die
Are you ready to die
The killer part just fits me
A stranger I've become
Are you ready to die
Are you ready to die
The killing scenes just please me
A stranger I've become

I am ready to die
I am ready to die
The killer part just haunts me
A stranger I've become
I am ready to die
I am ready to die
The killing scenes just haunt me
A stranger I've become

...A strangler I've become
...A strangler I've become
  





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Sun Dec 18, 2011 1:44 pm
NaRachel says...



Would it kill you to write something normal that i can actually relate to and that doesn't need an 18 plus warning on it?... Lol.. Nah i appreciate that your experimenting and that you've got the guts to actually write about stuff... well... stuff like this haha. This songs pretty repetitive so its hard to judge in it a poetic kind of way but i guess its more "soundsy" if that makes ANY sense to you. I guess what i'm trying to say is its seems to have more of an emphasis on the rhythm of the words rather than the words themselves. I'm not going to lie i laughed at the kitty, kitty, kitty bit and if that makes me a horrible person i'm sorry haha. Well I can at least applaud you for being different :) Everything technical i.e rhyming etc is brilliant as usual so go nuts with it ( i see you already have). Haha but nah write something nice soon pleeeeaaase :)
"You grow, you grow like tornado
You grow from the inside
Destroy everything through
Destroy from the inside
Erupt like volcano
You flow from the inside
You kill everything through
You kill from the inside"
  








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