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Mr Harry Potter, sir



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Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:52 pm
Mikko says...



This song is really not serious. It was written by yours truly and her sisters (they kind of helped me with this 'I-just-can't-write' thing). For Harry Potter<3

Verse 1

Your circular glasses,
your lightning-shaped scar,
your wizarding classes,
the blue flying car.

Oh oh, oh oh


Verse 2

Your parents got killed
when you were just a baby
the wizards they willed
that you'd save them, maybe.

Oh oh, oh oh


Chorus


Mr Harry Potter, sir
I know you had a really tough life
but wasn't it worth it?
You had their world on your shoulders,
the girls at your feet
and you became a hero.
Mr Harry Potter, sir
I know you almost died
lots of times in your life
but isn't that the thrill
of being the Chosen one?
Mr Harry Potter, sir
please do stop complaining
'cause we all wish we'd been you.


Verse 3

Your Hogwarts entry letter
where ever did you put it?
Guess life got better
so you jumped right in it

Oh oh, oh oh

Verse 4


Your cool ginger friend
and the girl so nerdy
stayed with you til the end
(sorry about your birdie!)

Oh oh, oh oh


(Chorus)


Bridge


So I guess we'll be seeing you
in 19 years from now.
You'll still be the Boy Who Lived
only you'll look older.
Mr harry Potter, sir,
why not fix your eyesight?
Those glasses, I mean,
are getting a little ol'

Oh oh, oh oh


(Chorus)


End


Mr Harry Potter, sir
you had a wicked life,
and consider yourself lucky
for your kick-butt wife!
Last edited by Mikko on Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:24 pm
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LemonyIce says...



Mikster! <3

:O More Harry Potter! XD I loved this song! You and your sisters have done a great job! :D

Mr Harry Potter, sir
you had a wicked life,
and consider yourself lucky
for your kick-butt wife!


LOVE. :smt049 I absolutely love the reference you made to Ginny. XD Kick butt wife! It totally describes her! XD Just one thing. I'm pretty sure it's a typo:

Mr Harry Potter, sir
I know you almost diesd
lots of times in your life


Besides that, I absolutely loved it. Why can't YWS have a love button? :C

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Sat Dec 17, 2011 3:54 pm
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SwallowedByInsanity says...



2 things.
I love harry potter (potter puppet pals ftw)
and i LOVE your icon! hahaha oh run, with his ruffled suit...
anyway, onto the song. It was hilarious and I loved every stanza.
Mikko wrote:Mr harry Potter, sir,
why not fix your eyesight?
Those glasses, I mean,
are getting a little ol'

I've always thought the same thing! he's a wizard, why not rid of those silly glasses? haha but yeah, I think they suit his personality. He just wouldn't be potter without them! Keep writing, and keep on lovin' harry til the end. (:
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Sat Dec 17, 2011 4:06 pm
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ChocoCookie says...



Mikko! :D


Looool!! I laughed so badly at this. :P
Seriously! I loved this song so much! Your sisters have done a good job making a crazy job. xD

I loved the chorus part too. ^.^
Great worrk.. Make more songs, I shall insist, please! :P

Keep .. Uhm. Ahem. Err. Writing and Singing Songs! ^o^

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Sat Dec 17, 2011 7:00 pm
midnightsky says...



Loved the lyrics, great job!!! Continue creating songs, but next time add a little more rhythm and rhyme...
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Sat Dec 17, 2011 7:01 pm
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midnightsky says...



Loved the lyrics, great job!!! Continue creating songs, but next time add a little more rhythm and rhyme, which will make your Chorus a lot more interesting to read...

Chorus

Mr Harry Potter, sir
I know you had a really tough life
but wasn't it worth it?
You had their (the) world on your shoulders,
the girls at your feet
and you became a hero. (This does not really have anything to do with the stanza).

- Midnight
Last edited by midnightsky on Sun Dec 18, 2011 5:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:13 pm
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lili024 says...



It is an Incredible poem!
I LOVED IT SO MUCH! I am one of the biggest Harry Potter geeks ever so naturaly I <3 it!
Mr Harry Potter, sir
you had a wicked life,
and consider yourself lucky
for your kick-butt wife!

That is one of the best parts!
you and your sisters did a great job!
Lili
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BigBadBear says...



Your cool ginger friendand the girl so nerdystayed with you til the end(sorry about your birdie!)


Haha, that part made me laugh. It's kind of a pointless poem, but it was fun to read. I love Harry Potter, so I couldn't resist reading this.

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Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:26 am
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slytherin7 says...



Awwh!! I love this song
Your cool ginger friend
and the girl so nerdy
stayed with you til the end
(sorry about your birdie!)


Loved this cause you didn't forget about his friends and Hedwig. Keep writing, fellow hp lover!! XD
  





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Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:32 am
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LiesOnLies says...



I guess I'm, so far, the only who doesn't like this at all..lol. Oh well, I don't see it as being a big deal to you anyway. I haven't seen the last Harry Potter yet and to my understanding he's supposed to die, then someone told me that he doesnt' die he gets resurrected..what the hell? I wanted him to DIE and stay DEAD so no more books or movies will be made about him. Just comes to show you can't always get what you want..lol.

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Sun Dec 18, 2011 6:44 am
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92nida says...



Okay... That was a big deal of funny! I LOVED IT! LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! Infact I was trying out new tunes that seemed apt for it. Way to go man........!
  





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Sun Dec 18, 2011 1:47 pm
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NaRachel says...



Haahhahahahahahahhaha I totally lol'd at the "sorry about your birdie" Thanks for the laughs XD
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Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:08 pm
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Confused.pirate says...



I love this! I feel like most of the stuff I write would be repeated from the lovely previous reviewers, but I just have to say I absolutely adore the creativity in this and the unique subject for a song. I can't say I've ever read a HP song on YWS, so bravo for taking my HP YWS lyrical virginity! ;)

I wish I could hear this with the tune and the music! I feel like it'd be extremely epic and fun.

It would have been pretty legit if you wrote a lyric for every book...though I think you cover most of the story quite well.

Keep writing! :)

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Mon Dec 19, 2011 9:55 pm
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youngwolf1105 says...



OMG, this is so adorable! Since it's a song, and songs are never truely grammatically correct, I won't go into that. But it's just so adorabel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I truely love it this much <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 lol!
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